Korjaukset

AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjattu

Text from Shmelevanumber4 - English

  • My Cat

  • I've got a very amazing cat.
  • He is red and fluffy.
  • He is clever and fast.
  • He likes hunting.
    • When he sees a fly, he runs and jumps for her.
    • In morhings we like to play.
    • I pick my leg out and in my blanket, and he jumps.
  • Sometimes he manages to catch it.
    • He is really pickiest in food.
    • I and my elder sister make porridge on chicken broth, then cut chicken meat and mix it.
    • He likes lay on the window sill very much.
    • When sun is too bright, he stretches there and closes his eyes.
  • We have cages with amadines and parrots.
  • He likes to sit beside them and watch them.
    • Sometimes he scraches me.
    • It is painfull, but I like him still.
    • After all, he is kind anyway, and ocassionally I pester him too much.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English