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  • My first day at school

  • I'll tell you about my first day at school...
    • When I was 4 years old I went to "kínder garten" at a School called "San Diego",it's a catholic school where I had to pray 3 times at day.
    • When I went to my first day at school I recall I was going with my mom and I was wearing a white uniform and I was crying because I didn't want to go at school and when I was walking I falled down and my uniform got dirty :c I had to come back to my house to clean it!
  • I arrived too late!
    • :c But I remember it was a good day (I don't recall more details, but I think it was a great day c:) I think I felt good that day because I wanted to go everyday!
    • My teacher has called "Isabel" she was too pacient and kind (because I had another teacher at the next year called "Jaquelinne" and she was so grumpy and evil :c) another thing I recall: In classroom we had an old telephone and everone wanted to play with it!
  • I'd like to live that age again! another thing every course had to play a choreography for a day where we had to present a "revista de gimnasia".

SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English

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    • When I went to my first day at school I recall I was going with my mom and I was wearing a white uniform and I was crying because I didn't want to go at school and when I was walking I falled down and my uniform got dirty :c I had to come back to my house to clean it!
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    • When I went to my first day at school I recall I was goinged to go with my mom and .I was wearing a white uniform and I was crying because I didn't want to go at school and when.While I was walking I falled down and my uniform got dirty :cso I had to cometurn back to my house to clean it!ed them up.
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    • My teacher has called "Isabel" she was too pacient and kind (because I had another teacher at the next year called "Jaquelinne" and she was so grumpy and evil :c) another thing I recall: In classroom we had an old telephone and everone wanted to play with it!
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    • My teacher has called's name was "Isabel" s. She was too pactient and kind (becausebut in contrast with her I had another teacher at the next year who was called "Jaquelinne" and she was so grumpy and evil :c) a.Another thingmoment I recall: I/remember from school is in classroom that we had an old telephone and everone wanted to play with it!
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