Korjaukset

Text from de-Rain - English

  • The nest

    • Today I've witnessed a good city story.
    • Three men dressed in a janitor's uniform sat on the low fence of the front garden.
  • In front of them there was a parking begirted with a wire mesh.
    • And near the mesh the fourth man hunkered. - Hey guys!
    • - he said suddanly - Look here, it's the bird's nest!
  • His workmates stood up in a moment and appeared by him.
  • All of them looked throug the mesh at the line of untouched grass and young tiny shrubs.
    • There, dangerously close to cars and it's weels, was the nest, maden between three strong sprigs of willow herb.
    • - Wow, the real nest, and in such a bad place...
    • - Yeah, it should be a young silly bird...
    • - They'll crush her. All that cars. - Yes. - Yes.
    • They stood still a bit, have staring on the nest and scratching their unshaven chins.
    • - I saw a few bricks near the shop - said the youngest finaly.
    • - We can make a border to protect her.
    • And they have done it.
    • Three men went to the parking, and one stood opposit the nest for they can't loose the place.
    • In a few minutes three men and the parking keeper has appeared from the other side of the mesh.
    • They dropped bricks in the grass and made a border. - Look, guys.
    • It's the giirl's car.
  • And it's close to the nest.
  • - said the keeper.
    • - You know, how girls drives.
    • She can move back insted of moving forward...
    • - Let's move the car a bit. - Yes.
    • - Ok. - Let's do it.
    • Four men reverted the car a little.
    • And then they went away and waited, because the bird, frightened by sounds and actions, was gone.
    • After a few minutes the bird has reterned.
    • Men looked to each other and smiled.
    • - OK, the break's ended.
    • It's time to work, guys! They've gone.
    • And left the nest with hesitated but protected little bird.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English