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Văn bản từ ev9eniy - English

  • The Letter to College

    • Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Eugen and I am writing to you because I would like to study at your college.
    • There I would like to learn the advanced course of project management as well as business communications.
    • Because I have working 11 years of experience in these fields, I would like start in the advanced level and take two years course.
    • I suggest that your courses efficiently help me to improve my skills rather than I might acquire them during my work.
    • I have also a degree in engineering, which, in my opinion, helps my for understanding complex things during the study.
    • I have chosen your college because it is placed near my home town and, what is the most important, it has a good reputation among the students that graduated from it.
    • I would like to receive detailed information about your prices and content of the courses.
  • Thank you in advance.
  • Yours faithfully, Eugen.

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    • Because I have working 11 years of experience in these fields, I would like start in the advanced level and take two years course.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • BecauseAs I have working 11 years of experience in these fields, I would like start inat the advanced level and take the two years course.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • I suggest that your courses efficiently help me to improve my skills rather than I might acquire them during my work.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I suggestbelieve that your courses will efficiently help me to improve my skills ratherin such a way thant I might acquire them during my work.would not normally be able to in a job.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • I have also a degree in engineering, which, in my opinion, helps my for understanding complex things during the study.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have also a degree in engineering, which, in my opinion, helps my fore to understanding complex things during the study.
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    • I have also a degree in engineering, which, in my opinion, helps my for understanding has helped me to develop the skills to understand an array of complex thingopics during themy studyies.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • I have chosen your college because it is placed near my home town and, what is the most important, it has a good reputation among the students that graduated from it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have chosen your college because it is placed near my home town and, what is the most important, it has a good reputation among the students that graduated from it.
      PrabalfromSpacePrabalfromSpace profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have chosen your college because it is placed near my home town and, what is the most important, it has a good reputation amongst the students that have previously graduated from it.
      SophiebrouhahaSophiebrouhaha profile picture Comments
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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