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  • The Chart

  • The chart illustrates the popularity of different public places among Australians, migrants from English-speaking countries and other countries.
  • Overall, the most popular place for visiting is Cinema, while Theatre is the less attractive place among these 3 groups of people.
  • It can be seen from the chart that the percentage of Australians and English-speaking migrants visited public places is approximately the same; meanwhile the preferences of migrants from other countries are differ.
  • Thus, the highest percentage of Cinema visitors belongs to Australians and English-speaking migrants (70 % and 65 % respectively).
  • They also like attending Zoo and Library (38-50 % on an average).
  • However, only 20-25 % of English-speaking people visit Theatre.
  • New migrants from other countries prefer attending Library and Cinema (55 % and 50 % respectively).
  • The percentage of them visiting Zoo is close to English-speaking visitors (about 35 %), while the number of Theatre visitors is twice less than those who speak English.
  • To sum up, Cinema is a haunt for all groups of people living in Australia.
  • Non speaking English migrants often visit Library, probably, to improve their English.
  • The popularity of Theatre is quite low among these 3 groups of people.

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    • The chart illustrates the popularity of different public places among Australians, migrants from English-speaking countries and other countries.
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    • Overall, the most popular place for visiting is Cinema, while Theatre is the less attractive place among these 3 groups of people.
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  • câu 3
    • It can be seen from the chart that the percentage of Australians and English-speaking migrants visited public places is approximately the same; meanwhile the preferences of migrants from other countries are differ.
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    • Thus, the highest percentage of Cinema visitors belongs to Australians and English-speaking migrants (70 % and 65 % respectively).
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    • The percentage of them visiting Zoo is close to English-speaking visitors (about 35 %), while the number of Theatre visitors is twice less than those who speak English.
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