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- Please tell me how to say my brother's birthday
- My brother lives in the city far from my house, and the times we have conversation is not so much.
- And so, I think my famly is very important for me.
- But it was an accident that I completly forgot my yonger brother's birthday.
It was yesterday!
- I had already presented him the cloth as birthdy's gift, but I'm sorry him not to say anything at the before today...
- Please tell me how to say him any good words.

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- Please tell me how to say my brother's birthday
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- ~~Please tell me how to say my brother's birthday~~Need help saying Happy Birthday to my brother.
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- My brother lives in the city far from my house, and the times we have conversation is not so much.
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- My brother lives in ~~the~~a city far from my house, and ~~the~~ sometimes we have conversation is not so much.
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- My brother lives in ~~the~~a city far ~~from my house, and the times we have conversation is not so much~~away, so don't get to speak very often.
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- My brother lives ~~in the cit~~very far from m~~y house, and the times we have conversation is not so much~~e, so we rarely get a chance to talk.
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- And so, I think my famly is very important for me.
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- ~~And so, I think my f~~Family is very important ~~for~~to me.
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- ~~And so, I think~~However, my family is very important for me.
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- But it was an accident that I completly forgot my yonger brother's birthday.
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- B~~ut it was an~~y accident ~~that~~, I completely forgot my younger brother's birthday.
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- It was yesterday!
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- I had already presented him the cloth as birthdy's gift, but I'm sorry him not to say anything at the before today...
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- I hadve already presented him ~~the~~with a cloth as a birthday's gift, but ~~I'm sorry him~~feel bad that I did not to say anything ~~at the~~to him before today...
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- I hadve already ~~presented~~given him thsome clothes as a birthday's gift, but I~~'m sorry him not to~~ need to apologize to him for not saying anything ~~at the before today..~~earlier.
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- Please tell me how to say him any good words.
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- PCan someone please thellp me ~~how to say him any good words. ¶~~find the words to tell him Happy Birthday and how I feel?
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