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  • family in second world war

  • Hi !
  • I know this is a long text, I'm training for exams (300 words) so please feel free to correct whatever part you want, not all of it if it's too long, thanks thanks thanks for your help !
  • :) While she was walking she felt something touched her hand, and first tough it was her daughter : she turned over and saw Katherina, her neighbour "Did you bring your daughter to the bus for st. pancreas?
  • ' asked Katherina "Well, she is not with me now so yes I just let her go " answered Roberta, sadly.
    • "You, I assume they could have let mother go with them.
    • Who knows if you ever gonna see her again?" "See her again" theses words triggered a twinge in her heart, and she felt suddenly twitchy : "I'm pretty sure they know what they do, they will probably let us vista them !" she said defensively Instead of trying to being nice with her, Katherina added "Love, this is gonna cost to much.
  • You'll have to stay here and work, I hope you said your goodbye." "I couldn't.
  • They just brought her inside of the bus without letting us say a final good bye" "Oh, and did Anna cried?" "Not at all.
  • Some were wailing, bursting into tears, whereas Anna was happier than ever, thinking about going on holidays" Now Katherina was grinning : "Well, that's maybe better.
    • Your daughter has always live in dreams.
    • Maybe it's better for her to live without you, she will grow up and become mature" "How can you dare say that ! She is only 6!
  • She needs her parents.
    • If you had children you would have understand.
  • " I did. she died.
  • So would have be yours if you didn't protect her.
    • You did the right thing Roberto" Roberta was now calming down, "So now we're alone.
  • I can barely imagine what's gonna happens next : I hope it will end soon.
    • "We have to pry for that.
    • Pry every days so your child and your husband be safe" " I don't trust in god, because if he existed he would have not let all of that happened" "well honey, you will have to or you will really alone for the rest of your days" Listening to theses world, Roberta started to feel dizzy again and faint down the floor.

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    • I know this is a long text, I'm training for exams (300 words) so please feel free to correct whatever part you want, not all of it if it's too long, thanks thanks thanks for your help !
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • :) While she was walking she felt something touched her hand, and first tough it was her daughter : she turned over and saw Katherina, her neighbour "Did you bring your daughter to the bus for st. pancreas?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • Who knows if you ever gonna see her again?" "See her again" theses words triggered a twinge in her heart, and she felt suddenly twitchy : "I'm pretty sure they know what they do, they will probably let us vista them !" she said defensively Instead of trying to being nice with her, Katherina added "Love, this is gonna cost to much.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Who knows if you ever gonna see her again?"¶"See her again" theses words triggered a twinge in her heart, and she felt suddenly twitchy :¶"I'm pretty sure they know what they do, they will probably let us visita them !" she said defensively ¶Instead of trying to being nice with her, Katherina added ¶"Love, this is gonna cost to much.
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    • They just brought her inside of the bus without letting us say a final good bye" "Oh, and did Anna cried?" "Not at all.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Some were wailing, bursting into tears, whereas Anna was happier than ever, thinking about going on holidays" Now Katherina was grinning : "Well, that's maybe better.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Maybe it's better for her to live without you, she will grow up and become mature" "How can you dare say that ! She is only 6!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • May be it's better for her to live without you, she will grow up and become mature"¶"How can you dare you say that ! She is only 6!
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    • Pry every days so your child and your husband be safe" " I don't trust in god, because if he existed he would have not let all of that happened" "well honey, you will have to or you will really alone for the rest of your days" Listening to theses world, Roberta started to feel dizzy again and faint down the floor.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Pry every days so your child and your husband be safe"¶" I don't trust in god, because if he existed he would have not let all of that happened"¶"well honey, you will have to or you will really be alone for the rest of your days"¶Listening to theses world, Roberta started to feel dizzy again and faint down the floor.
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