Corrections

Study in France

• After graduating from college, my father wanted me to attend a training about mineral but more focus on rare minerals such as diamonds and jade so that I can do business in this field.

• But it’s my father’s interest, not mine.

• At the same time, an old friend in France suggested me to go abroad and to learn different culture and different way of life.

• So I decided to joined her and proceed my master degree in France.

• I told my parents of my decision but they were strong against.

• Then I began to learn French and apply for a visa unbeknown my parents (I began to learn French and apply for the visa holding out on my parents).

• Just before leaving, I told them the truth and they were surprised but also proud of me that I can insist on my decision and my perseverance.

• But if I meet the same situation, I will try to convince them at first, because don’t let them worry about me.