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    • my motivation letter for a programme

    • First of all, it is the world’s leading electricity producer.
    • No matter in nucleur power generation or new energy, such as wind power generation.
    • Then, I very appreciate the company culture of your company.
    • I have participated in the Talents Fair last December in Shanghai and it really impressed me when the young talents were talking about their experiences.
    • You provide lots of opportunities for training and development and I can see that they’re growing up with the company.
    • It is the second raison I choose this programme and I think it is very important.
    • Finally, I am specialty in energy and I consult the programme details in the website and learned that mechanical scheme is about cooling water system, turbine support and others which are what I have learned during my master and I can make good use of my knowledge.
    • That’s why I decided to choose this programme and this scheme

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    • I have participated in the Talents Fair last December in Shanghai and it really impressed me when the young talents were talking about their experiences.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have participated in the Talents Fair last December in Shanghai, and it really impressed me when the young talents were talking about their experiences.
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    • You provide lots of opportunities for training and development and I can see that they’re growing up with the company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • YouThe company provides lots of opportunities for training and development, and I can see that they’people are growing up with the company.
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    • Finally, I am specialty in energy and I consult the programme details in the website and learned that mechanical scheme is about cooling water system, turbine support and others which are what I have learned during my master and I can make good use of my knowledge.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Finally, I am specialtyizing in energy and I consult the programme details ion the website and learned. What I learned while getting my master's in college is that mechanical scheme is about the cooling water system, turbine support and others which are what I have learned during my master and. I can make good use of my knowledge.
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