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  • My Tho city is situated in Tien Giang province, which is 70km far away from hcm city.
    • It is a small but cool city with 2 rivers acrossed, one is Bao Dinh river and the other is a brach of Cuu Long river.
    • Last year, after spending 3 first days of Tet holiday in HCM city, I came back here to visit my relatives as a new year traditional.
    • Hu tieu is not only the well-known dish in My Tho but also my most favorite dish whenever I have visited here.
  • It contains rice noodles, pork, dried squid, bean sprout with sauce from pork bones.
  • I used to have a lot of memories with my family in this city after we moved to HCM city 2 years ago.
    • Contrast to HCM city, My Tho is a small and silent city with the slow life.
    • It such a small city that you can easy to discover on foot and hardly to get lost.
  • The air still quite clean here with many trees along the street and a central park with a small lake full of water hyacinth.
    • In early morning, people usually go hiking around that lake and play badminton, basketball in a next sport center.
  • My Tho impressed me because its slow life.
  • Watching the traffic out the window in a coffee shop or hiking in the early morning balances my life and slow it down.
    • It is also a good place to discover on food and easy to find the good food in a short distance.
    • I really enjoyed the short trip to here every year.

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