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  • Dreaming makes us happy?

  • We used to dream of being a princess or a doctor when we were younger.
    • Nowadays we dream of a better life, of our next journey, of having money..because the advertisements shows us the myth of the perfect life : having a iPad, Going on a spring break So the question is, Do dreams makes people happier or in the contrary, do they makes them desperate ?
    • - First of all, dreaming of something definitely give people a reason to wake up the morning, to go to work or study.
  • They want to complete their task so they can do something better then.
    • For instance, a lot of people save money during the year to take a journey on holidays.
  • It also helps them to overcome the issues they sometimes have, because they know it will end later!
    • Nevertheless, dreaming is about magic world : it keeps us fare from the reality.
  • We dream and ponder about the future, about what we will do.
  • This way prevent and deter us from caring about the present moment.
    • Sometimes people's life can become unbearable because they always dream of something better so can not enjoy the present !
    • To end I would say that dreaming helps us to see the world better but keeps us fare from reality however we don't have to be target of our dreams and become sad because we can not achieve it sometimes.
    • We have to learn how to enjoy the present moment, because centuries ago they didn't have all that we have now, and can we say that they weren't happy for that reasons?
  • I'd better think they were happier than us.
    • Thanks you very much for your correction :)

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    • Nowadays we dream of a better life, of our next journey, of having money..because the advertisements shows us the myth of the perfect life : having a iPad, Going on a spring break So the question is, Do dreams makes people happier or in the contrary, do they makes them desperate ?
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    • Nowadays we dream of a better life, of our next journey, of having money..because the advertisements shows us the myth of the perfect life : having an iPad, Going on a spring break. ¶So the question is, : Do dreams makes people happier or in the contrary, do they makes them desperate ?
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    • - First of all, dreaming of something definitely give people a reason to wake up the morning, to go to work or study.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • -¶¶First of all, dreaming of something definitely give people a reason to wake up in the morning, to go to work or to study.
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    • Sometimes people's life can become unbearable because they always dream of something better so can not enjoy the present !
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Sometimes people's life can become unbearable because they always dream of something better so they can not enjoy the present !
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    • To end I would say that dreaming helps us to see the world better but keeps us fare from reality however we don't have to be target of our dreams and become sad because we can not achieve it sometimes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To end I would say that dreaming helps us to see the world better but keeps us fare from reality h. However we don't have to be target of our dreams and become sad because we can not achieve it sometimes.
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    • We have to learn how to enjoy the present moment, because centuries ago they didn't have all that we have now, and can we say that they weren't happy for that reasons?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We have to learn how to enjoy the present moment, because centuries ago they didn't have all that we have now, and can we say that they weren't happy for that reasons?
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