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    • The Letter to My Neighbours About they Dog

    • Dear Neighbors, I'm writing to you, because I have a problem with my sleep during the night.
    • This issue causes by your dog that have become barking at 3:00 a.m. for an hour since fortnight.
    • So, this is very annoying when you suddenly wake up at the night and can't go to asleep for a while.
    • That's crucial for me to have a good sleep, because I wake up early and my work is connected to the mental process which, in this case, makes not so good at my work.
    • Also, I have a little baby, who can't asleep either, and a healthy sleep is very important for his development.
    • For these reasons, you have to take the action which helps your dog to stay calm during the night.
    • For instance, you can try to walk your dog at the park in the evening.
    • I think that helps the dog feel tired and stay silent at the nights.
    • Yours faithfully, Eugen.

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    • This issue causes by your dog that have become barking at 3:00 a.m. for an hour since fortnight.
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    • This issue is causesd by your dog that haves becomen barking everyday since fortnight at 3:00 a.m. for an hour since fortntraight.
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    • This issue causes by your dog that have become barking at 3:00 a.m. for an hour sinceI'm afraid this is due to your dog barking in the early hours of the morning for the last fortnight.
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    • So, this is very annoying when you suddenly wake up at the night and can't go to asleep for a while.
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    • So, this is very annoying when youto me because I suddenly wake up at the night and can't go to anot continue my sleep for a while.
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    • So, this is very annoying when you suddI am sure as you can appreciate, this can be a little irritating as I am continually awoken and consequently wake up at the night and can't gostruggle to get back to asleep for a while.
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    • That's crucial for me to have a good sleep, because I wake up early and my work is connected to the mental process which, in this case, makes not so good at my work.
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    • That'it is crucial for me to have a good sleep, because I wake up early and my work is connected to the mental process which, in this case, makes me not so good at my work.
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    • That's crucial for me to have a good sleep, because I wake up early and my work is connected to the mental process which, in this case, makes not so good at my work.You are very considerate people and I am sure you appreciate the fact that I leave for work very early in the morning, therefore it is vital that I get a good night's sleep. Over the last fortnight, I have found it really difficult to concentrate at work as a result of my lack of sleep¶
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    • Also, I have a little baby, who can't asleep either, and a healthy sleep is very important for his development.
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    • Also, I have a little baby, who can't asleep either, and a healthy sleep is very important for his development.
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    • Also, as I have a little baby, who can't asleep either, and a healthysmall child, it is difficult enough getting him to sleep ias very important forit is, but he too hias developmenbeen waking up as a result.
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    • For these reasons, you have to take the action which helps your dog to stay calm during the night.
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    • For these reasons, you have to take the action whichs that helps your dog to stay calm during the night.
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    • For these reasons, you have to take the action whichthat helps your dog to stay calm during the night.
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    • For these reasons, you have to take the action which helps your dog to stay calm during the nightTherefore, I was wondering if it would be possible for you to prevent your dog from barking late at night - I appreciate this must be difficult - but I would be really grateful.
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