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  • Cover Letter

  • Hi Guys, I'm preparing my cover letter for possible future job positions.. can you correct it?
  • Thank you so much!!!
    • Here it is: Dear ………….: I Am a Versatile and Committed Candidate interested in applying to your Graduated Programme.
  • I learned of this position through your institutional website.
  • I recently received my M.Sc “Cum Laude” in Business Management at the University XXX.
  • I was primarily educated on Business Strategy and Entrepreneurship studies mainly focused on Strategic Management and Market Development.
    • Furthermore, thanks to my final work achieved in Corporate Social Responsibility, I had the possibility to deep dive the theories of CSR and the business model behind them giving me the opportunity to master your TBL approach.
    • For this reasons it would be such an honour for me to work in your pioneer Company, which had incorporated this social and sustainable model in its own core business.
    • In addition, I’ve been recently selected to participate to the “Talent University Programme” which is a partnership project promoted by XXX to develop, over the next three months, the capabilities of the best ten graduates of my University.
    • Moreover, I had some work-related experience during the past three years of studies such an internship position in a marketing company and a project management traineeship.
    • I trust this opportunity will strongly position my career focus on Business Analyst, Sales Representative and Business Development and thus allowing me to quickly move along my learning curve in a fast-path and top work environment.
    • I believe I would be able to give my contribution developing my professional and technical skills alongside my peers and my experienced colleagues with the ultimate goal of creating value through pragmatic, innovative and viable strategic guidelines.
    • My Academic background coupled with collaborative and team-leading approach, strong determination and communication skills that I have primarily developed through frequent working group participations will also be extremely valuable to me in an international and challenging environment of (company name).
  • They will help me thrive and achieve important and challenging objectives to assure a personal development together with a return value to your organization and the clients we will serve.
  • Therefore I am looking for an opportunity to discover a foreign business culture while enhancing further my English knowledge and getting some practical experience, fitting to my studies.
  • I am confident that this Graduate Programme would provide me the ideal opportunity to assist your organization and to expand my skills.
  • I am even sure that my high motivations and learning ability will help me through this exciting experience, and these coupled with my other skills would be a valuable asset for your organization.
    • My resume, which provides all the information about my academic and professional background along something more about myself, is enclosed in the following.
  • I would be pleased to provide you with any further information.
  • Thank you for your consideration and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
  • Sincerely, XXX

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

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    • I was primarily educated on Business Strategy and Entrepreneurship studies mainly focused on Strategic Management and Market Development.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
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    • Furthermore, thanks to my final work achieved in Corporate Social Responsibility, I had the possibility to deep dive the theories of CSR and the business model behind them giving me the opportunity to master your TBL approach.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Furthermore, thanks to my final work achieved in Corporate Social Responsibility, I had the possibility to deep divelve deeply into the theories of CSR and the business model behind them giving me the opportunity to master your TBL approach.
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      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
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    • For this reasons it would be such an honour for me to work in your pioneer Company, which had incorporated this social and sustainable model in its own core business.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • For thisese reasons it would be such an honour for me to work in your pioneer Company, which had incorporated this social and sustainable model in its own core business.
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    • For thisese reasons itI would be such an honour for mehonoured to work in your pioneer Ccompany, which hads incorporated this social and sustainable model in its own core business core.
      conejitausaconejitausa profile picture Yorumlar
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8
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    • In addition, I’ve been recently selected to participate to the “Talent University Programme” which is a partnership project promoted by XXX to develop, over the next three months, the capabilities of the best ten graduates of my University.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • In addition to my other achievements, I’ve been recently been selected to participate toin the “Talent University Programme” which is a partnership project promoted by XXX to develop, over the next three months, the capabilities of the besttop ten graduates of my University. over the next three months
      conejitausaconejitausa profile picture Yorumlar
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9
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    • Moreover, I had some work-related experience during the past three years of studies such an internship position in a marketing company and a project management traineeship.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Moreover, I have had some work-related experience during the past three years of studiesy such as an internship position in a marketing company and a project management traineeship.
      conejitausaconejitausa profile picture Yorumlar
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 10YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 10
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    • I trust this opportunity will strongly position my career focus on Business Analyst, Sales Representative and Business Development and thus allowing me to quickly move along my learning curve in a fast-path and top work environment.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I trust this opportunity will strongly position my career focus on Business Analyst, Sales Representative and Business Development and thus allowing me to quickly move along my learning curve in a fast-path and topced work environment.
      conejitausaconejitausa profile picture Yorumlar 1
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 11YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 11
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    • I believe I would be able to give my contribution developing my professional and technical skills alongside my peers and my experienced colleagues with the ultimate goal of creating value through pragmatic, innovative and viable strategic guidelines.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I believe I would be able to give my contributione to the company while developing my professional and technical skills alongside my peers and my experienced colleagues with the ultimate goal of creating value through pragmatic, innovative and viable strategic guidelines.
      conejitausaconejitausa profile picture Yorumlar
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 12YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 12
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    • My Academic background coupled with collaborative and team-leading approach, strong determination and communication skills that I have primarily developed through frequent working group participations will also be extremely valuable to me in an international and challenging environment of (company name).
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • My Aacademic background coupled with my collaborative and team-leading approach, strong determination and communication skills that I have primarily developed through frequent working group participteamwork situations will also be extremely valuable to me in an international and challenging environment of (your company name).
      conejitausaconejitausa profile picture Yorumlar 1
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 13YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 13
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    • They will help me thrive and achieve important and challenging objectives to assure a personal development together with a return value to your organization and the clients we will serve.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 14YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 14
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    • Therefore I am looking for an opportunity to discover a foreign business culture while enhancing further my English knowledge and getting some practical experience, fitting to my studies.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 15YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 15
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    • I am confident that this Graduate Programme would provide me the ideal opportunity to assist your organization and to expand my skills.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 16YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 16
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    • I am even sure that my high motivations and learning ability will help me through this exciting experience, and these coupled with my other skills would be a valuable asset for your organization.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 17YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 17
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    • My resume, which provides all the information about my academic and professional background along something more about myself, is enclosed in the following.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • My resume, which provides all the information about more detailed account of my academic and professional background along something more about myself, is enclosed in the following.
      conejitausaconejitausa profile picture Yorumlar
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 18YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 18
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