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Text from KAROLINA33 - English

  • The scent of freshly washed hair

    • My hair is long.
  • I like it that way.
    • Sometimes, when I feel bad i get the urge to cut my hair of.
  • I don't know why.
    • I think that should be a basis for some study.
    • Anyway, now i feel good and my hair is freshly washed.
    • Wen my hair is dirty and greasy I feel terrible.
    • And other way around, when I feel terrible I go and wash my hair and then I feel much much better.
  • Another basis for some study - Why do I feel better on the inside when I clean or decorate something on the outside?
    • And would I be sad all the time if i could not afford to wash myself every day?
    • There are people that do not wash them selves for a long time ad still they are perfectly happy with that.
    • So were lies the cause of my constant need for purity?
    • I don't know, and right now it's not important because I'm enjoying the scent of my freshly washed hair.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English