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從Atik13來的文本 - English

  • hello

  • Hi!!
    • My name is Atik i'm from France and i have 21.
    • I learn english and i hope to speak english flently in one year.
  • I think it's possible.
  • Because i want to become a construction manager and i want to work in US or in England and without english it's going to be impossible for me,

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