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Text from Atik13 - English

hello
Hi!!
- My name is Atik i'm from France and i have 21.
- I learn english and i hope to speak english flently in one year.
I think it's possible.
Because i want to become a construction manager and i want to work in US or in England and without english it's going to be impossible for me,

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- hello
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- Hi!!
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- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 1
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- My name is Atik i'm from France and i have 21.
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- My name is Atik i'm from France and i ~~have~~am 21.
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- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 2
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- I learn english and i hope to speak english flently in one year.
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- I am learning english and i hope to speak english fluently in one year.
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- I think it's possible.
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- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 4
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- Because i want to become a construction manager and i want to work in US or in England and without english it's going to be impossible for me,
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 5