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  • On Cosmetic Surgeries

    • Nowadays, we can see more and more women pursuing beauty take cosmetic surgeries.
    • Cosmetic surgeries hospitals of all description have mushroomed in numerous metropolitan districts.
    • And advertisements of surgeries are posted at every corner among buildings, elevators, etc. Generally thinking, it is developments of economy and progresses of technology that are supportive of the boom of cosmetic surgeries industry.
  • Besides, since human beings have a natural propensity of favoring beauty, it's no wonder that some people will be crazy about cosmetic surgeries.
    • What's more, under the influence of Korean wave, gorgeous images of stars have been stimulating us constantly, which is also an underlying reason.
    • From my point of view, there is no wrong for people to take cosmetic surgeries, especially for someone burnt their face in accident.
  • It's true that cosmetic surgeries bring us plenty of benefits and push the economy forward.
  • However, physical beauty is not everything.
    • We can't ignore our inward qualities when we woo exquisite appearance.

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    • And advertisements of surgeries are posted at every corner among buildings, elevators, etc. Generally thinking, it is developments of economy and progresses of technology that are supportive of the boom of cosmetic surgeries industry.
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    • Andlso, advertisements of surgeries are posted at every corner among buildings, elevators, etc.¶Generally thinking, it is developments of the economy and progresses ofin technology that are supportive of the boom of the cosmetic surgeries industry.
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    • Besides, since human beings have a natural propensity of favoring beauty, it's no wonder that some people will be crazy about cosmetic surgeries.
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    • What's more, under the influence of Korean wave, gorgeous images of stars have been stimulating us constantly, which is also an underlying reason.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • What's more, under the influence of the Korean wave, gorgeous images of stars have been stimulating us constantly, which is also an underlying reason.
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    • From my point of view, there is no wrong for people to take cosmetic surgeries, especially for someone burnt their face in accident.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • From my point of view, there is no wrong for people to take cosmetic surgeries, especially for someone who burnt their face in an accident.
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