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    • My retteling. " L.A. Movie." Chapter 6.

  • 1) I'm going to describe chapter 6 of the book, "L.A.
  • Movie" by Philip Prowser.
    • 2) The chapter starts when Lanny Samuel and Rick walk towards the set, where the scene "climbing of a mountain" is being filmed.
    • 3) An actress was hanging on a rope.
    • A moment later, there was a loud scream, and she fell to the studio floor!
  • 4) The detective thought Gail Lane was lying on the floor.
  • 5) He felt terrible, because he had been unable to protect her.
  • 6) There was nothing he could do.
  • 7) After that Lanny walked towards some other sets.
    • The detective didn’t believe!
    • 10 minutes later, he saw her – Gail!
  • She was in one of the dressing-room and she was absolutely alive and well.
    • 11) But suddenly someone Someone grabbed him from behind and knocked to the floor.
    • 12) It was 2 women, the Gail’s bodyguards.
  • 13) When it was clear that he wasn’t an attacker, he was introduced to the actress as her advisor on the film.
  • 14) As it turned out, the person who had the accident was Gail’s stunt-double.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English