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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

Teks daripada Kaezon - English

  • My Hobby

    • My favourite hobby is go to the Stadium- I think that all in the classroom knows my favourite chilean football team, well, is Universidad de Chile.
    • My hobby has directly relation with this because my hobby is Go to the stadium to see play my favourite team.
    • My presentation is divided into four topics Story: When i was a children my father brought me and my brother to the stadium but no much times because was very dangerous fot the “barras bravas” or “Hooligans”.
    • After, when I was in 8th with my brother I began go to the stadium more often.
    • I requested money out of the stadium and my routine all weekends is see my team.
    • Friends: When i travel for see my team, and when i went and go to the stadium, I have known very much people that now are my friends, in other communes of Santiago and in other cities in Regions of Chile as Iquique, Los Andes, La Calera, Rancagua, Talca, Concepcion, Talcahuano, Temuco, Puerto Montt, etc. Travels: For this reason, my friends, i have travelled to their cities following my team, knowing new friends, visiting my friends, I have good luck for my friends, i am knowing new cities, new places, new stadiums, follow the team and know more people is very addictive, is an incurable illness.
    • Importance: For me, my friends are very important for my social life, if they share with me the same passion is other reason to love their.
    • The mayority of my friends are “bullangueros”.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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  • Ayat 1
    • My favourite hobby is go to the Stadium- I think that all in the classroom knows my favourite chilean football team, well, is Universidad de Chile.
      Undi sekarang!
    • My favourite hobby is to go to the Stadium-.¶I think that alleverybody in themy classroom knows that my favourite cChilean football team is, well, is Universidad de Chile.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
    • My hobby has directly relation with this because my hobby is Go to the stadium to see play my favourite team.
      Undi sekarang!
    • My hobby hais directly relation with thised to them, because my hobby is GIS to go to the stadium to see playand watch my favourite team play.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
    • My presentation is divided into four topics Story: When i was a children my father brought me and my brother to the stadium but no much times because was very dangerous fot the “barras bravas” or “Hooligans”.
      Undi sekarang!
    • My presentation is divided into four topics¶SThere are four parts in my presentation. ¶"The story": When iI was a children, my father broughttook me and my brother to the stadium but no much timesa few times. We could not go more often because was veryof these dangerous fot the “barras bravas” or “Hooligans”.”
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
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  • Ayat 5
    • I requested money out of the stadium and my routine all weekends is see my team.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I requested money out of the stadium and my routine all weekends is seeused to ask my parents for money to go to the stadium, so that every weekend I could go watch my team play.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
    • Friends: When i travel for see my team, and when i went and go to the stadium, I have known very much people that now are my friends, in other communes of Santiago and in other cities in Regions of Chile as Iquique, Los Andes, La Calera, Rancagua, Talca, Concepcion, Talcahuano, Temuco, Puerto Montt, etc. Travels: For this reason, my friends, i have travelled to their cities following my team, knowing new friends, visiting my friends, I have good luck for my friends, i am knowing new cities, new places, new stadiums, follow the team and know more people is very addictive, is an incurable illness.
      Undi sekarang!
    • "Friends": When i travel for see my team, and when i went and go to the stadium, I have known very much people that now areOn my travels to my team's games as well as on my local trips to the stadium, I got to meet a lot of people who are now my friends, in ot. Thery communee from all different parts of Santiago, Chile and infrom other cities in Rand regions of Chile asthe country as well: Iquique, Los Andes, La Calera, Rancagua, Talca, Concepcion, Talcahuano, Temuco, Puerto Montt, etc.¶"Travels": For this reason, my friends, i haveKnowing so many people naturally led me to travelled to their cities, following my team, knowing new friends, visiting my friends, I have good luck for my friends, i am knowingas well as them coming to visit me in Santiago. I make friends easily. I travel to new cities, new places, newand stadiums, follow the team and. Getting to know more people is very addictive, - it is an incurable illness.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • Importance: For me, my friends are very important for my social life, if they share with me the same passion is other reason to love their.
      Undi sekarang!
    • "The Importance: For me, mt": My friends are very important for my social life,to me. And if they share with as passionate about some the same passion is ing else as I am about my team, that gives me another reason to share their love for their passions.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
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