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A Very Powerful
my little dragon always lives inside me.
sometimes, when it's hungry, puffed his flames inside me, for pushing me to do the impossible things.
and when it's satisfied. it becomes a nice like sea's breeze, raised me at the top of the world.
isn't the nice feeling, when you are expressed something like this.
my little dragon is a very powerful myth.
manufactures itself.

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- A Very Powerful
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câu 1
- my little dragon always lives inside me.
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câu 2
- sometimes, when it's hungry, puffed his flames inside me, for pushing me to do the impossible things.
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câu 3
- and when it's satisfied. it becomes a nice like sea's breeze, raised me at the top of the world.
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câu 4
- isn't the nice feeling, when you are expressed something like this.
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câu 5
- my little dragon is a very powerful myth.
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câu 6
- manufactures itself.
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