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Text from Eriver - English

  • A motivation letter

  • Dear Madame, Sir, I am Erica Verzotti, student of Scientific High School in Novara (Italy).
    • With this letter I would express my strongest interest for the participation at Master of Talents in Ireland in the summer 2014.
    • I’m planning to build an international career where English is on the basis of communication, so this programme will really mean a lot for my professional aspiration.
    • The occasion of Master of Talents is unique for a student of my age.
    • Firstly, it will be a peerless opportunity to improve my English on field, practicing it with Ireland native speakers and being in contact with their culture, that fascinate me since I was a child.
  • Moreover, it would definitely be the very beginning of my working experience.
    • I will deal with the big world of workers and this is extremely positive for my personal baggage and for my curriculum, of course.
    • I think to be a good candidate for this project because I know the importance of an experience of this calibre.
  • Nowadays, the opportunities offered to younger people are often rare or economically unaffordable.
  • The Master of Talents is the right help to them.
    • I would be very grateful if you consider my application and give me the chance to participate at the Master of Talents programme in Ireland.
  • Thank you very much in advanced for your consideration.
  • Yours faithfully, Eriver

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    • With this letter I would express my strongest interest for the participation at Master of Talents in Ireland in the summer 2014.
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    • With this letter, I wouldish to express my strongest interest for the participation atof Master of Talents in Ireland in the summer 2014.
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    • I’m planning to build an international career where English is on the basis of communication, so this programme will really mean a lot for my professional aspiration.
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    • I’m planning to build an international career where English is on the basismedium of communication, so this programme will really mean a lot for my professional aspiration.
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    • Firstly, it will be a peerless opportunity to improve my English on field, practicing it with Ireland native speakers and being in contact with their culture, that fascinate me since I was a child.
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    • Firstly, it will be a peerless opportunity to improve my English on field, practicing it with Ireland native Irish speakers and being in contact with their culture, that which fascinated me since I was a child.my childhood.
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    • I will deal with the big world of workers and this is extremely positive for my personal baggage and for my curriculum, of course.
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    • I will deal with the big world of workerspeople and this is extremely positive for my personal baggagexperience and for my curriculum, of course.
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    • I think to be a good candidate for this project because I know the importance of an experience of this calibre.
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    • I think to bebelieve I am a good candidate for this project becauseas I know the importance of an experience of this calibre.that can be gained on such occasions.
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    • I would be very grateful if you consider my application and give me the chance to participate at the Master of Talents programme in Ireland.
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    • I would be very grateful if you would consider my application and give me the chance to participate atin the Master of Talents programme in Ireland.
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