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- My childhood Story
While I was child I didn't Like to study becaUse Walking AND Playing more funny.I was twelve Years old Oneday My friend umut AND I Together WE were Playing Football in THE park then THE Older ONE someone came near our then he Said WE someone is smothering in THE See,WE Wondered AND went there realy he was right.
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- My childhood Story
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- ~~My childhood Story~~ Hello,i am looking for International friend that will discuss any thing from culture,health,love,society and relationship with me,so for more information and better correspondence about me,you can write to my Gmail account below so that we can have a start thanks.¶Best regards,¶Rachel Mike.¶{rachelmike77@gmail.com}
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- While I was child I didn't Like to study becaUse Walking AND Playing more funny.I was twelve Years old Oneday My friend umut AND I Together WE were Playing Football in THE park then THE Older ONE someone came near our then he Said WE someone is smothering in THE See,WE Wondered AND went there realy he was right.
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