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- My childhood Story
While I was child I didn't Like to study becaUse Walking AND Playing more funny.I was twelve Years old Oneday My friend umut AND I Together WE were Playing Football in THE park then THE Older ONE someone came near our then he Said WE someone is smothering in THE See,WE Wondered AND went there realy he was right.
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- My childhood Story
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- While I was child I didn't Like to study becaUse Walking AND Playing more funny.I was twelve Years old Oneday My friend umut AND I Together WE were Playing Football in THE park then THE Older ONE someone came near our then he Said WE someone is smothering in THE See,WE Wondered AND went there realy he was right.
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