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  • Please help me hurry

    • １） there is an unfortunate thing to happen to me some day, that's what I was inflamed teeth, so I will sit a little bit away from you to keep your toilet, you know what I mean.
    • ２） 2)hi hi, actually my tooth infection is causing unpleasant odors, you sympathize with me 3) Ever since I have never received any country scholarship.
    • 4) my dad is a mechanic, his job is to repair trucks, but now retired and my father and my mother, then switched to advertising, printing on plastic waste, I think my parents have devised ways to save the old material quite reasonable and economical 5) I want to win the school gaping study 90 -100% of you, because my family could only give me allowance every year an amount of about 30 million VNĐ, about 1430 U.S. dollars 6) I do not have any relatives in the UK at all.
    • But you rest assured I will not do anything illegal in your country, because after coming here I spent most of the time to learn and engage in practical work experience 7 I was a member of the volunteer club called "two thousand rice productivity".
    • Sure you do not understand why the name is not correct. okay let me explain!
    • Firstly, here is a volunteer, volunteers from different positions as workers, farmers, the elderly, pensioners, student, students, intellectuals.,, we contribute material such as money, rice, candy, even clothes, and most importantly the strength to jointly create the charity dinner for all subjects.
    • I find this activity very meaningful and I want to make this activity not only development in Hanoi but also brought it to cater for the poor, underprivileged circumstances in Hai Duong-where I was born 9) after completion of the undergraduate program, they go to and ownership of certain conditions materially, I will strive to help those circumstances eo le with foul sweat, my own effort 8)you know why I do not want to travel along, because the following reasons,first of all, I think that when I go to another country to study, I not only gained achievements in the natural and social sciences.
    • The secon,I also live in a cultural environment more modern Vietnam. learn something new and interesting at anytime, anywhere, and also have the opportunity to compare the most practical way between Vietnam and other developing countries that similarities and differences in what point, people are educated and any such development.
    • And finally,it is also extremely important and no less valuable learning university knowledge, for I was so. basic subjects that I want to learn that construction works.
    • Also if possible I would learn more diplomas management, governance, so that after completion of the course, return to Vietnam I could participate in politics。I mean people tend to be independent, you need to distinguish independent and lonely it offline completely different. independence is itself you can do a lot of work, but you always think loneliness is only you exist in the world around you even though there are many relatives and classmates. as you can see, I have height superior to those kids the same age as me.
    • This is just strong but also have the disadvantage for me.
    • I tell you okay.
    • Universities such as security, police academy, generally only blocks of military recruiting candidates under 180cm in height and weighing less than 75 pounds. add to that the tables and chairs to sit in the school education in Vietnam is slightly smaller so that I can sit comfortably. it makes me uncomfortable.
  • My favorite saying of my father, he said, people with large body size as his father should live abroad for suitable.
    • So, I think this is a good opportunity for me to follow what my dad has supported me noi.ban not?
    • My house does not do very much better off, the income of my parents in average compared with the average income of Vietnamese people.
    • I parked at the university, my family quite worried about the cost but I will be in 5 years in college. but fortunately, thanks to the social welfare policies such as student loan to cover the lifetime learning, it has support for my parents to raise part. but as long as it was not enough, I want to strive more to ginhf the scholarships are worth more, which I always cherished ambition and ccoos to perform for it

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  • cümle 1
    • １） there is an unfortunate thing to happen to me some day, that's what I was inflamed teeth, so I will sit a little bit away from you to keep your toilet, you know what I mean.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • １） there isOne day, an unfortunate thing to happened to me some day, that's what I was inflamed teeth, so I will sit a little bit away from you to keep your toilet, you know what I mean; my tooth became inflamed. I won't sit too close to you.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
  • cümle 2
    • ２） 2)hi hi, actually my tooth infection is causing unpleasant odors, you sympathize with me 3) Ever since I have never received any country scholarship.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • ２） 2)hi hi, actually m My tooth infection is actually what is causing these unpleasant odors,. I hope you can sympathize with me.¶3) Ever since, I have nevern't received any country scholarships to go to your country.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • 4) my dad is a mechanic, his job is to repair trucks, but now retired and my father and my mother, then switched to advertising, printing on plastic waste, I think my parents have devised ways to save the old material quite reasonable and economical 5) I want to win the school gaping study 90 -100% of you, because my family could only give me allowance every year an amount of about 30 million VNĐ, about 1430 U.S. dollars 6) I do not have any relatives in the UK at all.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • 4) mMy dad iwas a mechanic, h. His job iwas to repair trucks, but now, he's retired and m. My father and my mother, then switched to advertising,. They printing on plastic waste,. I think my parents have devised ways to save the old material quite reasonable and economical ways to save the old material.¶5) I want to win the school gaping study 90 -100% of you, because my family could only give me allowance every year an amount yearly allowance of about 30 million VNĐ, (about 1$1,430 U.S. dollars)¶6) I do not have any relatives in the UK at all.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • But you rest assured I will not do anything illegal in your country, because after coming here I spent most of the time to learn and engage in practical work experience 7 I was a member of the volunteer club called "two thousand rice productivity".
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • But you rest assured, I will noon't do anything illegal in your country, because after coming here I spent most of themy time to learning and engageing in practical work experience.¶7 I was a member of the volunteer club called "two thousand rice productivity".
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
  • cümle 6
    • Firstly, here is a volunteer, volunteers from different positions as workers, farmers, the elderly, pensioners, student, students, intellectuals.,, we contribute material such as money, rice, candy, even clothes, and most importantly the strength to jointly create the charity dinner for all subjects.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Firstly, here i's a volunteer, volunteers from different positions as workers, farmers, the elderly, pensioners, student, students, and intellectuals.,, w We contribute material such as money, rice, candy, even clothes, and most importantly the strength to jointly create the charity dinner for all subjects.
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      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
  • cümle 7
    • I find this activity very meaningful and I want to make this activity not only development in Hanoi but also brought it to cater for the poor, underprivileged circumstances in Hai Duong-where I was born 9) after completion of the undergraduate program, they go to and ownership of certain conditions materially, I will strive to help those circumstances eo le with foul sweat, my own effort 8)you know why I do not want to travel along, because the following reasons,first of all, I think that when I go to another country to study, I not only gained achievements in the natural and social sciences.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I find this activity very meaningful and I want to make this activity not only for development ing Hanoi but also broughtfor it to cater for the poor, underprivileged circumstances in Hai Duong-where I was born¶9) aAfter completion of the undergraduate program, they go to and ownership of certain conditions materially, I will strive to help those circumstances eo le with foul sweat, my own effort¶8)you know why I do non't want to travel along, because the of the following reasons, first of all, I think that when I go to another country to study, I nodon't only gained achievements in the natural and social sciences.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
  • cümle 8
    • The secon,I also live in a cultural environment more modern Vietnam. learn something new and interesting at anytime, anywhere, and also have the opportunity to compare the most practical way between Vietnam and other developing countries that similarities and differences in what point, people are educated and any such development.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • The section, I also live in a cultural environment more modern Vietnam. lLearning something new and interesting at anytime, anywhere, and to also have the opportunity to compare the most practical ways between Vietnam and other developing countries that have similarities and differences in whadifferent points, people are educated and any such development.
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Yorumlar
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8
  • cümle 9
    • And finally,it is also extremely important and no less valuable learning university knowledge, for I was so. basic subjects that I want to learn that construction works.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • And finally, it i's also extremely important and no less valuable learning university knowledge, for I wasdid so. bBasic subjects that I want to learn that construction works.
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Yorumlar
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9
  • cümle 10
    • Also if possible I would learn more diplomas management, governance, so that after completion of the course, return to Vietnam I could participate in politics。I mean people tend to be independent, you need to distinguish independent and lonely it offline completely different. independence is itself you can do a lot of work, but you always think loneliness is only you exist in the world around you even though there are many relatives and classmates. as you can see, I have height superior to those kids the same age as me.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Also if possible I would learn more diplomas in management, and governance, so that after completion ofng the course, I could return to Vietnam and I could participate in politics。. I mean people tend to be independent, you need to distinguish independent and lonely it offlinthey are completely different. iIndependence isn itself is that you can do a lot of work, but you always think with loneliness ithat it's only you that exist in the world around you, even though there are many relatives and classmates there. aAs you can see, I have height superior to those kids the same age as me.
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Yorumlar
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 10YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 10
  • cümle 11
  • cümle 12
  • cümle 13
    • Universities such as security, police academy, generally only blocks of military recruiting candidates under 180cm in height and weighing less than 75 pounds. add to that the tables and chairs to sit in the school education in Vietnam is slightly smaller so that I can sit comfortably. it makes me uncomfortable.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Universities such as security, and the police academy, are generally only blocks of military recruiting candidates under 180cm in height and weighing less than 75 pounds. aAdd to that, that the tables and chairs to sit in the school education ins of Vietnam isare slightly smaller, so that I can sit comfortably. iIt makes me uncomfortable.
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Yorumlar
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 13YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 13
  • cümle 14
  • cümle 15
  • cümle 16
    • My house does not do very much better off, the income of my parents in average compared with the average income of Vietnamese people.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • My house does not do veryisn't much better off, t. The income of my parents ins average compared withto the average income of Vietnamese people.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 16YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 16
  • cümle 17
    • I parked at the university, my family quite worried about the cost but I will be in 5 years in college. but fortunately, thanks to the social welfare policies such as student loan to cover the lifetime learning, it has support for my parents to raise part. but as long as it was not enough, I want to strive more to ginhf the scholarships are worth more, which I always cherished ambition and ccoos to perform for it
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I parked at the university, my family were quite worried about the cost but I will be in 5 yearsn 5 years time I'll be in college. but fFortunately, thanks to the social welfare policies such as student loans to cover the lifetime learning, it has support fored my parents to raise part. bBut as long as it was noisn't enough, I want to strive more to ginhf the scholarships are worth more, which is why I always cherished ambition and ccoI chose to perform for it¶
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Yorumlar
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 17YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 17