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Қазір түзетуге көмектесіңіз!Түзетілді

Мәтін алынған ... - English

  • Please help me hurry

    • １） there is an unfortunate thing to happen to me some day, that's what I was inflamed teeth, so I will sit a little bit away from you to keep your toilet, you know what I mean.
    • ２） 2)hi hi, actually my tooth infection is causing unpleasant odors, you sympathize with me 3) Ever since I have never received any country scholarship.
    • 4) my dad is a mechanic, his job is to repair trucks, but now retired and my father and my mother, then switched to advertising, printing on plastic waste, I think my parents have devised ways to save the old material quite reasonable and economical 5) I want to win the school gaping study 90 -100% of you, because my family could only give me allowance every year an amount of about 30 million VNĐ, about 1430 U.S. dollars 6) I do not have any relatives in the UK at all.
    • But you rest assured I will not do anything illegal in your country, because after coming here I spent most of the time to learn and engage in practical work experience 7 I was a member of the volunteer club called "two thousand rice productivity".
    • Sure you do not understand why the name is not correct. okay let me explain!
    • Firstly, here is a volunteer, volunteers from different positions as workers, farmers, the elderly, pensioners, student, students, intellectuals.,, we contribute material such as money, rice, candy, even clothes, and most importantly the strength to jointly create the charity dinner for all subjects.
    • I find this activity very meaningful and I want to make this activity not only development in Hanoi but also brought it to cater for the poor, underprivileged circumstances in Hai Duong-where I was born 9) after completion of the undergraduate program, they go to and ownership of certain conditions materially, I will strive to help those circumstances eo le with foul sweat, my own effort 8)you know why I do not want to travel along, because the following reasons,first of all, I think that when I go to another country to study, I not only gained achievements in the natural and social sciences.
    • The secon,I also live in a cultural environment more modern Vietnam. learn something new and interesting at anytime, anywhere, and also have the opportunity to compare the most practical way between Vietnam and other developing countries that similarities and differences in what point, people are educated and any such development.
    • And finally,it is also extremely important and no less valuable learning university knowledge, for I was so. basic subjects that I want to learn that construction works.
    • Also if possible I would learn more diplomas management, governance, so that after completion of the course, return to Vietnam I could participate in politics。I mean people tend to be independent, you need to distinguish independent and lonely it offline completely different. independence is itself you can do a lot of work, but you always think loneliness is only you exist in the world around you even though there are many relatives and classmates. as you can see, I have height superior to those kids the same age as me.
    • This is just strong but also have the disadvantage for me.
    • I tell you okay.
    • Universities such as security, police academy, generally only blocks of military recruiting candidates under 180cm in height and weighing less than 75 pounds. add to that the tables and chairs to sit in the school education in Vietnam is slightly smaller so that I can sit comfortably. it makes me uncomfortable.
  • My favorite saying of my father, he said, people with large body size as his father should live abroad for suitable.
    • So, I think this is a good opportunity for me to follow what my dad has supported me noi.ban not?
    • My house does not do very much better off, the income of my parents in average compared with the average income of Vietnamese people.
    • I parked at the university, my family quite worried about the cost but I will be in 5 years in college. but fortunately, thanks to the social welfare policies such as student loan to cover the lifetime learning, it has support for my parents to raise part. but as long as it was not enough, I want to strive more to ginhf the scholarships are worth more, which I always cherished ambition and ccoos to perform for it

Әр сөйлемді дұрыстауға көмектесіңізші - English

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  • Сөйлем 1
    • １） there is an unfortunate thing to happen to me some day, that's what I was inflamed teeth, so I will sit a little bit away from you to keep your toilet, you know what I mean.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • １） there isOne day, an unfortunate thing to happened to me some day, that's what I was inflamed teeth, so I will sit a little bit away from you to keep your toilet, you know what I mean; my tooth became inflamed. I won't sit too close to you.
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      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1
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  • Сөйлем 3
    • 4) my dad is a mechanic, his job is to repair trucks, but now retired and my father and my mother, then switched to advertising, printing on plastic waste, I think my parents have devised ways to save the old material quite reasonable and economical 5) I want to win the school gaping study 90 -100% of you, because my family could only give me allowance every year an amount of about 30 million VNĐ, about 1430 U.S. dollars 6) I do not have any relatives in the UK at all.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • 4) mMy dad iwas a mechanic, h. His job iwas to repair trucks, but now, he's retired and m. My father and my mother, then switched to advertising,. They printing on plastic waste,. I think my parents have devised ways to save the old material quite reasonable and economical ways to save the old material.¶5) I want to win the school gaping study 90 -100% of you, because my family could only give me allowance every year an amount yearly allowance of about 30 million VNĐ, (about 1$1,430 U.S. dollars)¶6) I do not have any relatives in the UK at all.
      Ali-BAli-B profile picture Пікірі 1
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 3Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 3
  • Сөйлем 4
    • But you rest assured I will not do anything illegal in your country, because after coming here I spent most of the time to learn and engage in practical work experience 7 I was a member of the volunteer club called "two thousand rice productivity".
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • But you rest assured, I will noon't do anything illegal in your country, because after coming here I spent most of themy time to learning and engageing in practical work experience.¶7 I was a member of the volunteer club called "two thousand rice productivity".
      Ali-BAli-B profile picture Пікірі
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 4Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 4
  • Сөйлем 5
  • Сөйлем 6
    • Firstly, here is a volunteer, volunteers from different positions as workers, farmers, the elderly, pensioners, student, students, intellectuals.,, we contribute material such as money, rice, candy, even clothes, and most importantly the strength to jointly create the charity dinner for all subjects.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Firstly, here i's a volunteer, volunteers from different positions as workers, farmers, the elderly, pensioners, student, students, and intellectuals.,, w We contribute material such as money, rice, candy, even clothes, and most importantly the strength to jointly create the charity dinner for all subjects.
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Пікірі
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 6Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 6
  • Сөйлем 7
    • I find this activity very meaningful and I want to make this activity not only development in Hanoi but also brought it to cater for the poor, underprivileged circumstances in Hai Duong-where I was born 9) after completion of the undergraduate program, they go to and ownership of certain conditions materially, I will strive to help those circumstances eo le with foul sweat, my own effort 8)you know why I do not want to travel along, because the following reasons,first of all, I think that when I go to another country to study, I not only gained achievements in the natural and social sciences.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • I find this activity very meaningful and I want to make this activity not only for development ing Hanoi but also broughtfor it to cater for the poor, underprivileged circumstances in Hai Duong-where I was born¶9) aAfter completion of the undergraduate program, they go to and ownership of certain conditions materially, I will strive to help those circumstances eo le with foul sweat, my own effort¶8)you know why I do non't want to travel along, because the of the following reasons, first of all, I think that when I go to another country to study, I nodon't only gained achievements in the natural and social sciences.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 7Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 7
  • Сөйлем 8
    • The secon,I also live in a cultural environment more modern Vietnam. learn something new and interesting at anytime, anywhere, and also have the opportunity to compare the most practical way between Vietnam and other developing countries that similarities and differences in what point, people are educated and any such development.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • The section, I also live in a cultural environment more modern Vietnam. lLearning something new and interesting at anytime, anywhere, and to also have the opportunity to compare the most practical ways between Vietnam and other developing countries that have similarities and differences in whadifferent points, people are educated and any such development.
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Пікірі
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 8Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 8
  • Сөйлем 9
  • Сөйлем 10
    • Also if possible I would learn more diplomas management, governance, so that after completion of the course, return to Vietnam I could participate in politics。I mean people tend to be independent, you need to distinguish independent and lonely it offline completely different. independence is itself you can do a lot of work, but you always think loneliness is only you exist in the world around you even though there are many relatives and classmates. as you can see, I have height superior to those kids the same age as me.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Also if possible I would learn more diplomas in management, and governance, so that after completion ofng the course, I could return to Vietnam and I could participate in politics。. I mean people tend to be independent, you need to distinguish independent and lonely it offlinthey are completely different. iIndependence isn itself is that you can do a lot of work, but you always think with loneliness ithat it's only you that exist in the world around you, even though there are many relatives and classmates there. aAs you can see, I have height superior to those kids the same age as me.
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Пікірі
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 10Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 10
  • Сөйлем 11
  • Сөйлем 12
  • Сөйлем 13
    • Universities such as security, police academy, generally only blocks of military recruiting candidates under 180cm in height and weighing less than 75 pounds. add to that the tables and chairs to sit in the school education in Vietnam is slightly smaller so that I can sit comfortably. it makes me uncomfortable.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Universities such as security, and the police academy, are generally only blocks of military recruiting candidates under 180cm in height and weighing less than 75 pounds. aAdd to that, that the tables and chairs to sit in the school education ins of Vietnam isare slightly smaller, so that I can sit comfortably. iIt makes me uncomfortable.
      GethinM39GethinM39 profile picture Пікірі
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 13Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 13
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  • Сөйлем 15
  • Сөйлем 16
  • Сөйлем 17
    • I parked at the university, my family quite worried about the cost but I will be in 5 years in college. but fortunately, thanks to the social welfare policies such as student loan to cover the lifetime learning, it has support for my parents to raise part. but as long as it was not enough, I want to strive more to ginhf the scholarships are worth more, which I always cherished ambition and ccoos to perform for it
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • I parked at the university, my family were quite worried about the cost but I will be in 5 yearsn 5 years time I'll be in college. but fFortunately, thanks to the social welfare policies such as student loans to cover the lifetime learning, it has support fored my parents to raise part. bBut as long as it was noisn't enough, I want to strive more to ginhf the scholarships are worth more, which is why I always cherished ambition and ccoI chose to perform for it¶
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 17Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 17