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Văn bản từ FernandoH - English

  • My favourite song

  • I'm going to talk about one of my favourite songs.
    • I think all of my favourite songs are written and performed by british singers bands.
    • One of this songs is entitled "Switzerland", it's performed by a british band called "Daughter", they are relatively new.
    • This band has one álbum and four extended plays.
    • The fisrt time I heard this song was past year, I was looking for a new band that could mix rock, indie and post-rock.
    • Indeed I like many songs from them, songs as "Winter", "Youth", "Human" and "Amsterdam", They has cover of a Daft Punk's song (Get lucky) but this versión is so different and so deep.
    • I like "Switzerland" because an accordion is present on all the song (and its one of my favourite instruments) and it makes me imaginne I walking or running around "Alpes", Yeah!
  • I'm a very imaginative person.
    • My plan is when I'll go to U.K I'll go Daughter's concert, I'd like hear this song in live.
    • When I discovered this song I had posted on many social networks as Facebook, Twitter, Tumblr and my personal blog and I shared it with many friends and they liked this band too.
    • I think this band should be more famous and came to Chile one day.
    • I'll be the first buying the ticket c:

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    • One of this songs is entitled "Switzerland", it's performed by a british band called "Daughter", they are relatively new.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • One of thiseir songs is entitled "Switzerland", it's performed by a british band called "Daughter", they are relatively new.
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    • The fisrt time I heard this song was past year, I was looking for a new band that could mix rock, indie and post-rock.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The fisrt time I heard this song was plast year, I was looking for a new band that could mix rock, indie and post-rock.
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    • Indeed I like many songs from them, songs as "Winter", "Youth", "Human" and "Amsterdam", They has cover of a Daft Punk's song (Get lucky) but this versión is so different and so deep.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Indeed I like many songs from them, songs such as "Winter", "Youth", "Human" and "Amsterdam", They hasalso have cover of a Daft Punk's song (Get lucky) but this versión is so different and so deep.
    • Indeed I like many songs from them, songsuch as "Winter", "Youth", "Human", and "Amsterdam",. They hasve a cover of a Daft Punk's song ("Get lucky)" but this versióon is so different and so deep.
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    • I like "Switzerland" because an accordion is present on all the song (and its one of my favourite instruments) and it makes me imaginne I walking or running around "Alpes", Yeah!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I like "Switzerland" because an accordion is present oin all the song (and its one of my favourite instruments) and it makes me imaginne I walking or running around "Alpes", Yeah!
    • I like "Switzerland" because an accordion is present on allthroughout the song (and its one of my favourite instruments) and it makes me imaginne Ie walking or running around the "Alpes", Yeah!
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    • When I discovered this song I had posted on many social networks as Facebook, Twitter, Tumblr and my personal blog and I shared it with many friends and they liked this band too.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • When I discovered this song I had posted it on many social networks aslike Facebook, Twitter, Tumblr and my personal blog and I shared it with many friends and they liked this band too.
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