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- I love the Music
- i will go to the Guns and Roses' Concert.
I write a song that talk about you.
The bass is an good instrument.
I am sing in high voice. i work with music all time. my best friend linsten Corridos and Banda. i Learn english with lyrics of the someone songs.

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- I love the Music
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- I love ~~the~~ Music
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- i will go to the Guns and Roses' Concert.
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- iI will go to the Guns and Roses' Concert.
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câu 2
- I write a song that talk about you.
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câu 3
- The bass is an good instrument.
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câu 4
- I am sing in high voice. i work with music all time. my best friend linsten Corridos and Banda. i Learn english with lyrics of the someone songs.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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