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Hello everyone!!!!
Hi.
My name is Ryo.
- I'm a Japanese I live in Japan now.
- If you are interested in Japan, write me please.
If you come to Japan, tell me :) I can help you.

huhaApril 2014Undi sekarang!
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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Hello everyone!!!!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hi.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- My name is Ryo.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I'm a Japanese I live in Japan now.
  Undi sekarang!
- I'm a Japanese , and I live in Japan now.
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- If you are interested in Japan, write me please.
  Undi sekarang!
- If you are interested in Japan, ~~write me pleas~~please write to me.
  Rainwaker Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- If you come to Japan, tell me :) I can help you.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5