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  • Help me to correct mistakes in my retelling, please=)

    • 1) I'm going to describe the 4 chapter of the book "L.A.
  • Movie" by Philip Prowser.
    • 2) First of all, the detective Lanny Samuel left Mike Devin's apartment.
  • 3) After a sleepless night he went home to get some rest.
    • 4) Later, Lanny Samuel drove to his office.
  • There he lessened a new phone messages, one of them was from unknown.
    • Someone was warring him don't to get involved in Mike Devin's business.
  • 5) A little bit later the detective met with his old friend, Rick, who was Head of Security at Magic Movie Productions.
  • 6) I'd like to mention that the meeting was held into a movie studio.
  • 7) Rick offered Lanny a job.
  • And for this reason he gave his friend a photo.
  • 8) Unbelievable Lanny Samuel saw in the photo Gail Lane, the hottest actress in Hollywood.

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