Text von Anne04 - English
Help me to correct mistakes in my retelling, please=)
- 1) I'm going to describe the 4 chapter of the book "L.A.
- Movie" by Philip Prowser.
- 2) First of all, the detective Lanny Samuel left Mike Devin's apartment.
- 3) After a sleepless night he went home to get some rest.
- 4) Later, Lanny Samuel drove to his office.
- There he lessened a new phone messages, one of them was from unknown.
- Someone was warring him don't to get involved in Mike Devin's business.
- 5) A little bit later the detective met with his old friend, Rick, who was Head of Security at Magic Movie Productions.
- 6) I'd like to mention that the meeting was held into a movie studio.
- 7) Rick offered Lanny a job.
- And for this reason he gave his friend a photo.
- 8) Unbelievable Lanny Samuel saw in the photo Gail Lane, the hottest actress in Hollywood.
- Anne04January 2013Jetzt abstimmen!
BITTE, hilf jeden Satz zu korrigieren! - English