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  • It's hard to imagine life without the Internet would be like Still some people still claim that their lives would be meaningless if there is no Internet .
  • But along with the benefits that still exist due to the Internet there is a downside , there is not enough free time to enjoy life , especially for young people We can see that the Internet has dominated almost every field , from medicine , engineering , teaching to the business world  The Internet has really enhanced the workplace especially for the majority of individuals that .
  • The most serious drawback is that the Internet has become an addiction for millions of users .
  • • What is addiction , what are the bad habits are not to be missed ....
  • • Now, psychologists in many countries bring up emergency response to a malady of the new fad , which is Internet addiction .
  • • Appeared in Vietnam in a couple of years ago but the pace of development by storm , online games quickly rose to become the kind of entertainment is the most popular youth in the present moment .
  • • The " Gamers " are wasting too much time , and mental health in the game pointless .
  • • When abused , whether it's the gentle game for women, it also causes more travel implications , not to mention the violent and depraved game .
  • • And, of course , is not to play games development or creative personality , which only brings deviant ideas with unpredictable consequences .
  • • Pupils and students have online gaming addiction manifests as pale due to lack of sleep , learning the weak force , shot in poor health , and more delusional ...
  • • I also have violent behavior when the game mimics the game .
  • • Recently there are some paranoid gamer died from suicide in loss of control .
  • • It is the disease of schizophrenia often paranoid , depression .
  • • Not only violent games , currently appear more game characters pictures cool dress , " poor " .
  • • This is an issue warnings to society should intervene and stop time for the youth of today and tomorrow.
  • • According to research , there are four symptoms of Internet addiction : forget the time , distracted eating and sleeping ; anger , stress , anxiety when not online ; be equipped with more powerful computers , new software ; manifestations of depression , or anger and social isolation .Internet Addiction - an act which causes stress to the lives of the victims and for the whole family , friends , colleagues - is a psychological disease that has spread worldwide .
  • • Currently, there are about 5-10 % of Americans ( or about 15-20 million people ) may have been addicted to the Internet , Kimberly Young , director of the Center for Internet Addiction of America , said .
  • • Net addicts up from 18-30 % in China , South Korea and Taiwan .- Coleen Moore , coordinator at the Illinois Institute for Addiction Recovery , said she has clients from school age to adulthood , including those who spend 14-18 hours per day on the network - Online gaming is a form of Internet addiction and is spreading rapidly among young people .
  • • Brian Robbins , a member of the Association of International Game Developers , said the number of people addicted to playing video games online is increasing.
  • • " As many as 90-95 % of web games are free ," Robbins said .cause - Do not self -employed , running trend crowd .
  • • Satisfying the imagination , forget reality .
  • • The youth of this disease is often those with the attitude problem behavior , guilt .
  • • On the Internet to reinforce their confidence .
  • • Major networks in the world , they feel successful .Addicts are not interested in studying , working , or even drop out of school , quit .- Reduce exposure to family , friends , living isolated in front of a computer ,- The Internet addicts often suffer from depression , fear and unwillingness to communicate with others .
  • • Many children with sleep disorders , numbness of hands .Also , solutions for internet addiction in Vietnam , according to you , why ?Like alcohol or drug addiction such, Internet addiction brings certain consequences of psychological , physical and relationship around .
  • • Do not let the result be regarded as the most significant for human society to ruin yourself - @ citizen of age .Recently , many Internet users in Vietnam proved to be pressing on some online social networking is to take advantage of the information content propaganda against the State of Vietnam , defamatory mode , vi violating the provisions of lawlaws and threaten national security Internet is a short double-edged sword, if we use the positive purposes sao.Neu not overdo the internet ourselves its victims 10 years , not very long journey but the development of information technology , especially the Internet has brought Vietnam integrate into the world and their place in the vucRat important economic sectors , using social Internet nhugiao healthcare , trade , diplomacy, ....

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    • It's hard to imagine life without the Internet would be like Still some people still claim that their lives would be meaningless if there is no Internet .
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    • But along with the benefits that still exist due to the Internet there is a downside , there is not enough free time to enjoy life , especially for young people We can see that the Internet has dominated almost every field , from medicine , engineering , teaching to the business world  The Internet has really enhanced the workplace especially for the majority of individuals that .
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    • • Now, psychologists in many countries bring up emergency response to a malady of the new fad , which is Internet addiction .
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    • • Appeared in Vietnam in a couple of years ago but the pace of development by storm , online games quickly rose to become the kind of entertainment is the most popular youth in the present moment .
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    • • When abused , whether it's the gentle game for women, it also causes more travel implications , not to mention the violent and depraved game .
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    • • And, of course , is not to play games development or creative personality , which only brings deviant ideas with unpredictable consequences .
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    • • Pupils and students have online gaming addiction manifests as pale due to lack of sleep , learning the weak force , shot in poor health , and more delusional ...
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    • • According to research , there are four symptoms of Internet addiction : forget the time , distracted eating and sleeping ; anger , stress , anxiety when not online ; be equipped with more powerful computers , new software ; manifestations of depression , or anger and social isolation .Internet Addiction - an act which causes stress to the lives of the victims and for the whole family , friends , colleagues - is a psychological disease that has spread worldwide .
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    • • Currently, there are about 5-10 % of Americans ( or about 15-20 million people ) may have been addicted to the Internet , Kimberly Young , director of the Center for Internet Addiction of America , said .
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    • • Net addicts up from 18-30 % in China , South Korea and Taiwan .- Coleen Moore , coordinator at the Illinois Institute for Addiction Recovery , said she has clients from school age to adulthood , including those who spend 14-18 hours per day on the network - Online gaming is a form of Internet addiction and is spreading rapidly among young people .
      Balsuok dabar!
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    • • Brian Robbins , a member of the Association of International Game Developers , said the number of people addicted to playing video games online is increasing.
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    • • Major networks in the world , they feel successful .Addicts are not interested in studying , working , or even drop out of school , quit .- Reduce exposure to family , friends , living isolated in front of a computer ,- The Internet addicts often suffer from depression , fear and unwillingness to communicate with others .
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    • • Many children with sleep disorders , numbness of hands .Also , solutions for internet addiction in Vietnam , according to you , why ?Like alcohol or drug addiction such, Internet addiction brings certain consequences of psychological , physical and relationship around .
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    • • Do not let the result be regarded as the most significant for human society to ruin yourself - @ citizen of age .Recently , many Internet users in Vietnam proved to be pressing on some online social networking is to take advantage of the information content propaganda against the State of Vietnam , defamatory mode , vi violating the provisions of lawlaws and threaten national security Internet is a short double-edged sword, if we use the positive purposes sao.Neu not overdo the internet ourselves its victims 10 years , not very long journey but the development of information technology , especially the Internet has brought Vietnam integrate into the world and their place in the vucRat important economic sectors , using social Internet nhugiao healthcare , trade , diplomacy, ....
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