Korreksies

Text from LimeRain - English

  • I am a slave

  • I am a slave of my emotions.
  • They are my bloody enemies.
    • They are a reasons why I am is so shy.
    • Sometimes i want to change my life, but then i think about future.
    • What will happen if i do something?
    • Maybe all people in a whole world will laughing above me? No!
    • Laugh it is not my ghastly nightmare.
    • Really, i am afraid that my favourite peoples, half of my heart will dissapointed if i will do mistakes

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English