Korjaukset

AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjattu

Text from FernandoH - English

  • A good friend!

  • Her name is Arleth.
    • We met in 2007, in primary school, but we are good friends since 2008.
    • I don't know the reason why we are friends, but i think it could be by our personalities, because we are too similar.
    • I like her because she is too kind, sincere and spontaneus.
    • Ussually we hang out at many places in Santiago.
    • One day, with many other friends we went at Parque O'Higgins and we yielded three playcars (it was expensive but we enjoyed!) and we made a raceway, like mario car!
  • (we have a video on YouTube).
  • So far, we are good friends.
  • We talk about many important things and i think we have a beautiful friendship.
    • I would like that i could live nearer of her house, because our houses are too far.
    • I'd like she could read this post, because I think she had never ocurred that i could write about her! it will be a surprise!
    • We call us by "mugre", it's a funny nickname that means dirty or grimy.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English