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- I want learn english!
Hello everybody!
- I am an spanish boy with 31 years old.
- My english writing and speaking is very bad.
- I want learn to write an speak english very well.
- My objetive is travel around the world and speak english with other persons without any problem.
- I could teach spanish...im native from Madrid (Spain).
- ¿Anybody wants make a change? :)

arcossApril 2014Bầu chọn ngay!
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- I want learn english!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I want to learn eEnglish!.
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câu 1
- Hello everybody!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 2
- I am an spanish boy with 31 years old.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I am an spanish boy ~~with~~ ,31 years old.
  samspc Comments
  
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- I am a~~n spanish boy with 31 years old~~ 31-year-old Spanish boy.
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câu 3
- My english writing and speaking is very bad.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- My eEnglish writing and speaking iskills are very ~~bad~~poor.
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câu 4
- I want learn to write an speak english very well.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I want to learn to write and speak english very well.
  samspc Comments
  
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- I want to learn to write and speak english ~~very well~~fluently.
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câu 5
- My objetive is travel around the world and speak english with other persons without any problem.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- My ~~objetive~~goal is to travel around the world and speak eEnglish with other pe~~rsons~~ople without any problems.
  kdh Comments
  
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- My ~~objetive~~goal is to travel around the world and speak eEnglish with other pe~~rsons~~ople without ~~any problem~~difficulty.
  GabrielaZ Comments
  
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câu 6
- I could teach spanish...im native from Madrid (Spain).
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I could teach syou Spanish.~~..im~~ I'm a native of~~rom~~ Madrid, (Spain).
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câu 7
- ¿Anybody wants make a change? :)
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ¿ADoes anybody wants to make a change? :)
  GabrielaZ Comments
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7

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I want learn english!

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