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  • Business letter to a potential client(company) from Recr.Agency

    • (Company info) Dear Mr. White, With reference to your post in (job portal) on (April 20, 2014), regarding job offer on position of (Java junior), I would like to offer our service to meet your requirements.
    • We are fast-growing, international recruiting agency, whose goal is to find perfect fit for a position.
    • Our company would be pleased to help you with a hiring process, because we believe, that without the right people in the right positions, neither a company nor its individual units can turn in exceptional performance.
    • We are working with highly qualified IT specialists from Ukraine.
    • Ukraine is the 4th country with the largest number of IT developers in the world.
  • More than 16000 high-skilled IT specialists graduate from Ukrainian universities yearly.
    • And we can open to you this job market where you can find human talent and know-how, which are needed to drive knowledge-based industry.
    • We will seek and provide for you best applicants who are going to fulfill your requirements and increase effectiveness of your team’s performance.
    • Our services costs for mentioned position will reach 10% of annual employee’s income in case of successful placement.
  • We look forward to a fruitful working relationship in the future. Sincerely,

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • (Company info) Dear Mr. White, With reference to your post in (job portal) on (April 20, 2014), regarding job offer on position of (Java junior), I would like to offer our service to meet your requirements.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • (Company info)¶¶¶Dear Mr. White,¶¶¶With reference to your post in (job portal) on (April 20, 2014), regarding the job offer onf a position ofas (Java junior), I would like to offer our service to meet your requirements.
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    • Our company would be pleased to help you with a hiring process, because we believe, that without the right people in the right positions, neither a company nor its individual units can turn in exceptional performance.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Our company would be pleased to help you with a hiring process, because we believe, that withoutonly by having the right people in the right positions, neither can a company norand its individual units can turn inguarantee exceptional performance.
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    • And we can open to you this job market where you can find human talent and know-how, which are needed to drive knowledge-based industry.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And we can open to you this job market where you can find the prerequisite human talent and the know-how, which are needed necessary to drive a knowledge-based industry.
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    • We will seek and provide for you best applicants who are going to fulfill your requirements and increase effectiveness of your team’s performance.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We will seek and provide for you best applicants who are going to fulfill your requirements and increase the effectiveness of your team’s performance.
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    • Our services costs for mentioned position will reach 10% of annual employee’s income in case of successful placement.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Our services costs for mentionedthe positions will reachtotal 10% of annualthe employee’s income in case of successful placementannual income.
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