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Text from Julie6433 - English

  • Motivation letter: intern reporter in Tajikistan

  • Madam, Sir, Recently graduated with my master’s degree in Global Security, I am today applying for the reporting intern offer in Dushanbe.
  • This choice is not haphazard as I am also having a bachelor’s degree in Foreign Languages (English and Russian, focused on International relations), an evidence of my interest for the post-soviet space and especially central Asia.
  • Furthermore, my experience as a risk analyst consultant for the 6 last months focused and specialized on CIS countries gave me the opportunity to deeper strengthen the knowledge I had on the area and offered me a comprehensive appreciation of the situation in this country, that I followed day after day.
  • I am a skilled communicator, writer, and I bring very strong research and interpersonal skills to this position.
  • I lived in Russia for 3 years, which also sparked the interest I have today for the area.
  • Such an experience within a structure like ACTED could be the best-expected opportunity to orientate and begin a carrier.
  • I truly believe I am a suitable candidate for the position in view of my education and the passion I have for the area.
  • I hope therefore, that on consideration of my resume, you will be persuaded of my potential to perform as a reporting intern in Tajikistan.
  • In the meantime, I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
  • Julie THEVENET

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    • Madam, Sir, Recently graduated with my master’s degree in Global Security, I am today applying for the reporting intern offer in Dushanbe.
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    • This choice is not haphazard as I am also having a bachelor’s degree in Foreign Languages (English and Russian, focused on International relations), an evidence of my interest for the post-soviet space and especially central Asia.
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    • Furthermore, my experience as a risk analyst consultant for the 6 last months focused and specialized on CIS countries gave me the opportunity to deeper strengthen the knowledge I had on the area and offered me a comprehensive appreciation of the situation in this country, that I followed day after day.
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    • I am a skilled communicator, writer, and I bring very strong research and interpersonal skills to this position.
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    • Such an experience within a structure like ACTED could be the best-expected opportunity to orientate and begin a carrier.
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    • I truly believe I am a suitable candidate for the position in view of my education and the passion I have for the area.
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    • I hope therefore, that on consideration of my resume, you will be persuaded of my potential to perform as a reporting intern in Tajikistan.
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