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    • ecology

  • Some people say that we shoul invest in ecological projects, while others believe that nature is doing well by itself.
  • In my oppinion it is very important to protect the environment from the destructive effects of modern society.
  • The industrial pollutions that affecting rivers, soil and air pollutions and cutting down trees can cause deterioration in quality of life.
  • We investing our money into factories and road building and do not think about our environment.
  • As a result we have a lot of illness and natural disasters.
  • To my mind we should support ecological projects to provide a better living.
  • There is an other oppinion that people should allow nature to take its course.
  • I agree with that, but it does not mean that we should ignore the negative effects of human activities that affect the planet's ecology.
  • I think that we should observe natural processes and try to find an alternative ways of producing and recycling.
  • We must stop wasting rivers and forests, it is the only way to help the environment.
  • As a conclusion, the purity of the natural human environment depends on our attitude to the nature.
  • By reducing carbon footprint and becoming a more efficient consumers of natural resources we will save nature.

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    • ecology¶ Some people say that we should invest in ecological projects, while others believe that nature is doing well by itself.¶ In my oppinion it is very important to protect the environment from the destructive effects of modern society/modernity.¶ The industrialism that affecting rivers, soil and air pollutions ,besides cutting down trees can cause deterioration in quality of life.¶ We speending our money into factories and road building, on the other hand do not think about our environment.¶ As a result we have lots of disease and natural disasters.¶ To my mind we should support ecological projects to provide a better living/life.¶ There is an other oppinion that people should allow nature to take its course.¶ I agree with that, but it does not mean that we should ignore the negative effects of human activities that affect the planet's ecology.¶ I think that we should observe natural processes and try to find an alternative ways of producing and recycling/recovering.¶ We must stop wasting rivers and forests, it is the only way to help the environment.¶ As a conclusion, the purity of the natural human environment depends on our attitude toward the nature.¶ By reducing carbon footprint and becoming more efficient consumers of natural resources we will save nature.¶¶
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