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    • Immigration before 1945

    • After the First World War, Belgian firms need manpower so they hire foreigners who come from neighboring countries such as France, Poland and Italy.
    • During the '30s, Belgium endure an economic crisis and is facing an increase in unemployment.
    • Therefore, manpower is no longer needed and belgium takes strict measures to limit the arrival of other immigrants.
    • The Between Two World Wars was characterized by two waves of Jewish immigration.
    • The first wave was in the 20s when the Jews of Poland fled poverty and antisemitic climate of their country.
    • The second wave was in 1933 when the German Jews was looking refuge after the birth of the Nazi regime.

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    • After the First World War, Belgian firms need manpower so they hire foreigners who come from neighboring countries such as France, Poland and Italy.
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    • After the First World War, Belgian firms needed manpower so they hired foreigners who come from neighboring countries such as France, Poland and Italy.
    • After the First World War, Belgian firms/ companies needed manpower, so they hire foreigners who comstarted hiring people from neighbouring countries such as France, Poland and Italy.
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    • Therefore, manpower is no longer needed and belgium takes strict measures to limit the arrival of other immigrants.
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    • Therefore, manpower iwas no longer needed and bBelgium takesook strict measures to limit the arrival of other immigrants.
    • Therefore, extra manpower iwas no longer needed and bBelgium takesook strict measures to limit the arrival of othernew immigrants.
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    • The first wave was in the 20s when the Jews of Poland fled poverty and antisemitic climate of their country.
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    • The first wave was in the 20s-ies, when the Jews of Poland/ Polish Jews fled poverty and antisemitic climate of/ antisemitism in their country.
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    • The second wave was in 1933 when the German Jews was looking refuge after the birth of the Nazi regime.
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    • The second wave was in 1933, when the German Jews wasere looking for refuge after the birth of the Nazi regimeNazi regime seized /took over power in Germany.
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