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- Letter of application!
- Hello, Mr. Brown I would like to apply for an occupation in your company.
- I think that I fit in your company, because I have done a practical traning and have only got surprisingly good feedback.
- I have also a good behaviour and I am social interacted.
- I am really able to work in a team like yours and I am really looking forward to hearing from you.
- - A curriculum vitae follows! Hendrik

Hendrik97March 2014Vota ara!
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SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English

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- Letter of application!
  Vota ara!
- ~~Letter of a~~Application! Letter
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Oració 1
- Hello, Mr. Brown I would like to apply for an occupation in your company.
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- Hello, Mr. Brown,¶¶I would like to apply for a~~n occupation~~ job in your company.
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- ~~Hello,~~Dear Mr. Brown,¶¶I would like to apply for a~~n occupa~~ position within your company.
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- ~~Hello,~~Dear Mr. Brown,¶¶I would like to apply for a~~n occupa~~ position within your company.
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- ~~Hello,~~Dear Mr. Brown,¶¶I would like to apply for a~~n occupa~~ position within your company.
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- ~~Hello,~~Dear Mr. Brown,¶¶I would like to apply for a~~n occupa~~ position within your company.
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- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 1
Oració 2
- I think that I fit in your company, because I have done a practical traning and have only got surprisingly good feedback.
  Vota ara!
- I think that I fit in your company, because I have done¶a practical traning and have ~~only~~ gotten surprisingly good¶feedback.
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- I think that I would fit in well in your company, ~~because~~as I have done¶a practical training and have only ~~got surprisingl~~received very good¶feedback.
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Oració 3
- I have also a good behaviour and I am social interacted.
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- I ~~have also a good behaviour~~am professional and ~~I am~~very social~~¶interacted~~.
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- I ~~have~~am also ~~a good behaviour and I am social¶interacted~~professional and interact well socially.
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- I have ~~also~~ a good ~~behaviour and I am social¶interacted~~professional track record, and I work well both independently and in a team.
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- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3
Oració 4
- I am really able to work in a team like yours and I am really looking forward to hearing from you.
  Vota ara!
- I am really able to work in a team like yours~~¶and I am really~~.¶I look~~ing~~ forward to hearing from you.
  Steve7603 Comentaris 1
  
  Marcar com a correu no desitjat?
- I ~~am really able to work~~work well in a team like yours¶ and ~~I am really~~am looking forward to hearing from you.
  TheOnion2895 Comentaris
  
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- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4
Oració 5
- - A curriculum vitae follows! Hendrik
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- ~~- A c~~I have also attached my Curriculum vVitae follows! ed by a Recommendation Letter by my referee/ former employer/ my school. ¶¶I look forward to hearing from you,¶¶Kind regards/ Yours sincerely,¶¶Hendrik¶
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Letter of application!

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