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    • help Hi every body, today I will introduce with you about topic “tourist destination“ . accodring to me, my Earth is a heaven with the beautiful places.
    • I have been growing but I just have come a few place of my city, example “Con mountain White Kiep ”, “ Thay pagoda”, “Cao pagoda”.
    • Outside , I always wish to visiting Thuong Hai habor.
    • At there, includes dozens of historic buildings, located along the Huangpu River,-background of the film that I have seen and I always image there í a day I’m at there to enjoy them direction by my eyes.
    • Near Thuong Hai is Hong Kong and Dai Loan.
    • I want to go to the Hong kong to see house with pool and garden roses like what I see in movies “the girl Shanghai”.
    • Taiwanese also known for building high-end casinos in existence long. and I also know that there are places even more black social organizations. you know why I say this not because I was a part anthology film fans by Andy Lau.
    • if I have to condition come to there certain that I would buy 10 a Shanghai-style dress to make gift for my the mother, the sister of my cousin's house.
    • Besides I also like to visiting japanese to go sightseeing with “ Cherry blossoms”.
    • When I was a child I used the toys made in Japanese, as robots ,motorbike, bike, pedicabs, toy model trains, toy plane remote control,.., of course, I’m a boy. re talking about the country where I live-Vietnam.
    • I think Nha Trang is the most appropriate place for me and my family can enjoy the scenic conditions of the Southern Ocean.
    • I think Nha Trang is an ideal destination not only because there is a place to relax with my family after months of studying hard day.
    • But as far as I know the quality of service there is also very good. also on trade issues, I think, Vietnam is one of the most significant places in the world and I always look forward foreign tourists will come to Vietnam as well as many people in Vietnam travel destinations in the world so famous. but now I want to hear other opinions!

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    • help Hi every body, today I will introduce with you about topic “tourist destination“ . accodring to me, my Earth is a heaven with the beautiful places.
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    • help¶Hi eEvery body, tToday I will introduce withbe telling you about topic “a few tourist destination“ . accodring to me, mys. Earth is alike heaven, with themany beautiful places.
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    • I have been growing but I just have come a few place of my city, example “Con mountain White Kiep ”, “ Thay pagoda”, “Cao pagoda”.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • I have been growing but I just have come a few place of my city,to very few places, up to this point in my life, that I would like to see; for example: Con mMountain White Kiep ”, “, Thay pPagoda”, “ and Cao pPagoda.
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    • At there, includes dozens of historic buildings, located along the Huangpu River,-background of the film that I have seen and I always image there í a day I’m at there to enjoy them direction by my eyes.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • AtIn there, includes background of a film that I have seen there were dozens of historic buildings, located along the Huangpu River,-background of the film that I have seen and I always image there í a day I’m at there to enjoy them direction by my eyes. I imagine that one day I will finally be able to enjoy the view in person.
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    • I want to go to the Hong kong to see house with pool and garden roses like what I see in movies “the girl Shanghai”.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • I wantould like to go to the Hong kong to see the house with pool and garden roses like what I seeaw in movies “t The gGirl Shanghai, with pool and garden roses.
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    • Taiwanese also known for building high-end casinos in existence long. and I also know that there are places even more black social organizations. you know why I say this not because I was a part anthology film fans by Andy Lau.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Taiwanese is also known for building high-end casinos in existence long. and I alsothat have been around for long time. I know that there are places evenwith more black social organizations. you know why I I do not say this not because I was a part anthology film fans by Andy Lau.
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    • if I have to condition come to there certain that I would buy 10 a Shanghai-style dress to make gift for my the mother, the sister of my cousin's house.
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    • ¶iIf I have to condition come to there certain thathe means to visit, I would buy 10 a Shanghai-style dresses to make gift for my the mother, the sister ofgive to my mother as a gift and my cousin's house.
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    • When I was a child I used the toys made in Japanese, as robots ,motorbike, bike, pedicabs, toy model trains, toy plane remote control,.., of course, I’m a boy. re talking about the country where I live-Vietnam.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • When I was a child I used the toys made in Japanese, asplayed with Japanese toys, like robots , motorbike, bike, pedicabs, toy model trains, toy plane remote control,.., of course, I’m a boy. re talking about t. You should know that I am a boy. The country where I live- in is Vietnam.
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    • I think Nha Trang is the most appropriate place for me and my family can enjoy the scenic conditions of the Southern Ocean.
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    • I think Nha Trang is the most appropriate place for me and my family cand I to enjoy the scenic conditionviews of the Southern Ocean.
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    • I think Nha Trang is an ideal destination not only because there is a place to relax with my family after months of studying hard day.
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    • I think Nha Trang is an ideal destination not only because t There is a place to relax with my family after months of studying hard day in Nha Trang, making it an ideal destination.
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    • But as far as I know the quality of service there is also very good. also on trade issues, I think, Vietnam is one of the most significant places in the world and I always look forward foreign tourists will come to Vietnam as well as many people in Vietnam travel destinations in the world so famous. but now I want to hear other opinions!
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • But aAs far as I know, the quality of service there is alsoin Nha Trang is very good. also onRegarding trade issues, I think, Vietnam is one of the most significant places in the world and. I always look forward foreign tourists will comevisits to Vietnam as well as m. Many people in Vietnam travel destinations in the world so famous. but now I wantworldwide to places just as famous. However, I would like to hear other opinions!
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