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Want to make friend
- hello everyone !
I want to learn English better.
- So I want to make friends with people to improve their English literacy.
- Everybody can make friends with me? Thank !

mrdong90March 2014Undi sekarang!
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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Want to make friend
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- hello everyone !
  Undi sekarang!
- hHello everyone !
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I want to learn English better.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- So I want to make friends with people to improve their English literacy.
  Undi sekarang!
- So, I want to make friends with people to improve their English literacy.
  genzaimu Ulasan 1
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- Everybody can make friends with me? Thank !
  Undi sekarang!
- Everybody can make friends with me?. Thank s!
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4