Corrections

Teks daripada kovaleva_lena - English

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Hello everyone.
- I m realy affraid to do mistakes in my letter and in my speech so i cant start to speak with foreigner.
- Today is first time when im here.
- Please correct this sentenses and after that i ll continie to write) thanks

Title
- Start
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hello everyone.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I m realy affraid to do mistakes in my letter and in my speech so i cant start to speak with foreigner.
  Undi sekarang!
- I am really affraid to domake mistakes in my ~~letter~~writing and in my speech , so iI can't start to speak with a foreigner.
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
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- I am realy affraid ~~to do~~of making mistakes in my letters/writing and in my speech , so i can~~t start to speak with foreigner~~not/can't start right now to speak with foreigners/natives (native speakers).
  sergeb78 Ulasan 1
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- Today is first time when im here.
  Undi sekarang!
- Today is my first time ~~when im~~ here.
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- Today is my first time ~~when im~~ here.
  sergeb78 Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- Please correct this sentenses and after that i ll continie to write) thanks
  Undi sekarang!
- Please correct thisese sentensces, and after ~~that i~~ wards I will continiue to write) tThanks
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- Please correct thisese sentensces and then/after that i will continiue to write). thanks
  sergeb78 Ulasan 1
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4