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  • The chart illustrates the expenditures of European customers on six particular goods.
  • It also compares the quantity of money that is spent on goods in Germany, Italy, France and Britain.
  • The chart shows that British customers spend more money than others in each category.
    • For example, their expenses on personal stereos and tennis racquets are about 155 000 £, on perfumes and CDs are approximately 160-165000 £, British spend on toys and photographic film 167000 and 172000 £ respectively.
  • The expenditures of Germans are the lowest among these countries.
    • Germans spend 145-149000£ on given goods.
  • Italians spend about 148000 £ on personal stereo while their expenses on goods from other categories achieve almost 150000 £.
  • The highest expenses of Italian customers are on toys and photographic film (157000 and 155000£ respectively).
    • The expenses of French customers on stereo, racquets and perfumes are about 142-143000 £, however they spend approximately 159-168000 £ on CDs, toys and photographic film.
  • In conclusion, this chart can illustrate financial position of Europeans as well as their preferences in goods from these categories.
  • For instance, the highest expenses in France and Britain are spent on photographic film, in Italy – on toys and in Germany – on tennis racquets.

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    • For example, their expenses on personal stereos and tennis racquets are about 155 000 £, on perfumes and CDs are approximately 160-165000 £, British spend on toys and photographic film 167000 and 172000 £ respectively.
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    • For example, their expenses on personal stereos and tennis racquets are about 155 000 £, on perfumes and CDs are approximately 160-165000 £,. The British spend on toys and photographic film 167000 and 172000 £ respectively.
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    • Italians spend about 148000 £ on personal stereo while their expenses on goods from other categories achieve almost 150000 £.
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    • The highest expenses of Italian customers are on toys and photographic film (157000 and 155000£ respectively).
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    • The expenses of French customers on stereo, racquets and perfumes are about 142-143000 £, however they spend approximately 159-168000 £ on CDs, toys and photographic film.
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    • In conclusion, this chart can illustrate financial position of Europeans as well as their preferences in goods from these categories.
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    • For instance, the highest expenses in France and Britain are spent on photographic film, in Italy – on toys and in Germany – on tennis racquets.
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