Korreksies

Text from Raffy_Patel - English

    • March 14a

  • Hello, world!
  • Wow, it really is a refreshing feeling following eight hours of sleep.
  • Right now I'm having breakfast: a cup of black coffee, pan de sal and a boiled egg.
    • I tried adding pork floss (which my sister brought from Singapore) and mayonnaise to my sandwich and it was delicious!
  • You should try it.
    • The temperature is starting to rise up, but at this moment it is still a comfortable heat.
    • My mom is done sweeping the garden of fallen leaves and litter.
  • Dad's contentedly lounging on his leather-seated chair in our small variety store waiting for patrons.
    • They both wake up much earlier than I do and finish their morning ritual right before I'm up.
  • Well, don't think of me as lazybones.
    • I hit the sack at 12 midnight or about 1AM after all the work's all in.
    • My work schedule's from 2PM to 10PM, but I can work 'til 1 in the morning.
    • After breakfast I'm planning on going downtown to buy some provisions so my mom won't have much trouble with meal preparations.
    • I was too busy the last few mornings and we have only been having eggs or canned goods or instant noodles for most breakfast of this week.
  • The refrigerator's almost empty now.
  • I told her to go hit one of our dogs in the head and stew him.
  • They eat more than we do anyway.
  • Breakfast is over. Bye for now!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English