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    • True story

    • A couple of years ago, i went with my friends Alessio Michael and Michele to snowboarding at Bardonecchia.
    • The first thing you have to do when you visit a new mountain is get to the top, and we have done.
    • Then we started to descend mountain avoiding ski-run, we go on the rocks, in to the forest then below the cable way, until, at certain point, the snow on the grow was over, there were only earth and grass.
    • So we started to walking with a board in our hand and we're back in the forest searching where was the ski-run.
    • After a few minutes we can saw a ski-run, and we started to walking in that direction until we arrived to a drop about 2 meters and the only way to pass this obstacle was jump down.
    • I jumped down, then Michael and while Alessio was going to jump, Michele have a brilliant idea!
    • He put his board under his ass like a bob (sled) and lunched himself for jump a drop in that way, but, obviusly, it was a bad idea, he lost control and collided with Alessio.
    • Both fall down on a tree and were hanging for a few second after falling toghether embraced.
    • This was the best funny things wich i have ever saw in my life!

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    • Then we started to descend mountain avoiding ski-run, we go on the rocks, in to the forest then below the cable way, until, at certain point, the snow on the grow was over, there were only earth and grass.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Then we started to descend the mountain, avoiding the ski-run, we goended up on the rocks, in to the forest then below the cable way, until, at a certain point, the snow on the grow was over, there werere was no more snow, only earth and grass.
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    • After a few minutes we can saw a ski-run, and we started to walking in that direction until we arrived to a drop about 2 meters and the only way to pass this obstacle was jump down.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After a few minutes we can saw a ski-run, and we started to walking in that direction until we arrived to a drop of about 2 meters and the only way to pass this obstacle was to jump down.
    • After a few minutes, we can saw athe ski-run, and we started to walking in that direction until we arrived to ahe drop of about 2 meters and t. The only way to pass thise obstacle was to jump down.
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    • He put his board under his ass like a bob (sled) and lunched himself for jump a drop in that way, but, obviusly, it was a bad idea, he lost control and collided with Alessio.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He put his board under his ass like a bob (sled) and launched himself forto jump athe drop in that way, but, obviously, it was a bad idea, he lost control and collided with Alessio.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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