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Could you correct my email please ? ;-) (and to improve it)
- Dear Sir, Thank you for your help .
- I would be happy to work on MTR line if you win the project.
- And if by chance any other position was to become available , I would be grateful if you would let me know. Best regards

nicoparis75March 2014Bầu chọn ngay!
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- Could you correct my email please ? ;-) (and to improve it)
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- Dear Sir, Thank you for your help .
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Dear Sir,¶¶Thank you for your help .
  genzaimu Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- I would be happy to work on MTR line if you win the project.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I would be happy to work on the MTR line if you win the project.
  genzaimu Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- And if by chance any other position was to become available , I would be grateful if you would let me know. Best regards
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- Andlso, if by chance any other position wais to become available , I would be grateful if you would let me know. Best regards
  genzaimu Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3