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A Small Fish
- A small fish bought yesterday, it played so high that flew out of the container itself this morning.
- Cute spirit bud, actually it's an albino, but hard to take care of.

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- A Small Fish
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- A small fish bought yesterday, it played so high that flew out of the container itself this morning.
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- A small fish I bought yesterday~~, it play~~ jumped so high that it flew out of ~~the~~its container ~~itself~~ this morning.
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- AI bought a small fish ~~bought~~ yesterday, it ~~play~~jumped so high that it flew out of ~~the~~its container ~~itself~~ this morning.
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- ~~A small fish bought yesterday, it play~~Yesterday I bought a small fish, and it jumped so high that it flew out of the container by itself this morning.
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- Cute spirit bud, actually it's an albino, but hard to take care of.
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- ~~Cute~~ It's a cute and high-spirited bud~~, a~~. Actually, it's an albino~~, but~~ and hard to take care of.
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- CIt is a cute spirit bud, though actually it's an albino~~, but~~. It is hard to take care of.
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