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- hello , my name is lucas i have 19 years old , and i came on this site to learn english and to became more best in english for my job because it's indisable . Thank

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- hello , my name is lucas i have 19 years old , and i came on this site to learn english and to became more best in english for my job because it's indisable . Thank
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- hHello , my name is lLucas ~~i have~~and i'm 19 years old ~~, and i~~. I have caome ton this site to learn eEnglish and to becaome ~~more best in english for my job because it's indisable~~ good at it as it's important for my job. Thank you
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- hHello ~~, m~~, My name is lLucas ~~i have~~. I am 19 years old , and iI came on this site to learn eEnglish and to ~~became more best in english~~improve my English skills for my job because it~~'s indisable~~ is a requirement. Thank you.
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