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Hello!
- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce that is short to remember.
- I would like to improve my English, and also I would like to know new people.
- And I can help you to improve your Spanish. See you son! Merce =).

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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce that is short to remember.
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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce ~~that is short to remember~~for short.
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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce that is ~~short~~easier to remember.
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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce ~~tha~~as it is ~~short~~easier to remember.
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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce t. That is shorter and easier to remember.
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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce ~~that is~~ it's¶short to remember.
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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce; that is ~~short~~easier to remember.
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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce t. That is ~~short~~easier to remember.
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- My name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce that is ~~short~~easier to remember.
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câu 3
- I would like to improve my English, and also I would like to know new people.
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- I would like to improve my English, and also I would like to get to know new people.
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- I would like to improve my English, and ~~also~~ I would like to get to know new people, too.
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- I would like to improve my English, and ~~also I would~~simultaneously like to know new people too.
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- I would like to improve my English, and ~~also~~ I would ~~like~~also like to get to know new people.
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câu 4
- And I can help you to improve your Spanish. See you son! Merce =).
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- And I can help you to improve your Spanish. See you soon! Merce =).
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- ~~And~~ I can also help you to improve your Spanish. See you soon! Merce =).
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- ~~And~~In return, I can help you to improve your Spanish. See you soon! Merce =).
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- And I can help you to improve your Spanish. See you soon! Merce =).
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- And I can help you to improve your Spanish. See you soon! Merce =).
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