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    • According to our plan of saling via the Internet we are sure that such volume (100 units) will be sold in the course of work.
    • But at the initial stage we wouldn't like to do the initial order for the large sum of money to have opportunity to begin work gradually.

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  • câu 1
    • According to our plan of saling via the Internet we are sure that such volume (100 units) will be sold in the course of work.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • According to our plan of salinge (or Sale target ) via the Internet we are product, we ensure that such volume (100 units) will be sold in the course of work.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • According to our plan of saling via the Internet we are sure that such volume (100 units) will be sold in the course of work.we are certain to sell 100 units via Internet.¶¶
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  • câu 2
    • But at the initial stage we wouldn't like to do the initial order for the large sum of money to have opportunity to begin work gradually.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But at the initial stage we wouldn't like to doprocess the initial order for the large sum of money to havwith a large amount of cost in order to get more opportunityies to begin workrun the business gradually.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But at the initial stage we wouldn't like to do the initial order for the large sum of money to have opportunity to begin work graduallytake on the work gradually, so we can ramp up to a larger order.
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